Author just a suggestion here, I think that the work could use more editing in terms of grammar and sentence structure since there are errors here and there which really just bug the reader and interrupts the flow of the story.
Dance
You’re back🥳
Just wanna ask how he’s supposed to kill him since he would have to use another experience card to gain the strength to do so
Finally, the fifth disciple, Zhao Yue, could no longer endure the bizarre atmosphere. She threw herself on the ground as she burst into tears and said, "Master, I was wrong! I got confused in that moment! Ever since I joined the sect, I've never thought of betraying Master! I beg your forgiveness, Master!"
My Disciples Are All Villains
Eastern · MSRZP
Thanks for the chapter! It’s been quite some time since I’ve seen a author who writes fan fics with this much potential.
Hope more chapters will come, although it has been a few months ^^
Good chapter, btw, are you gonna continue the story?
Are you going to continue this story?
Wahoo!
The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree