Webnovel Author: DaasWolfe - Novel&Fanfic Collection

hhhhhhhhhhh. that was nice of you to ask about my health, but no i survived :). I am releasing a new novel soon i have improved a lot recently i just been writhing in amazon i am now coming back to web novel.

The storyline is unique, i enjoyed reading it The character design of our MC surfaces through his actions and body language. It's better than most books out thier. I was immersed into the story from just few chapters i reccomned this. Well done auhtore keep up the good work.

I see, well an orange hair dose look retarded indeed i misunderstood him my bad thank you for clarifying. English isn't my strongest point and couple that with my rashness well tragedy is bound to accrue here or there i guess. [img=recommend]

Alright to be honest what i did was a mistake when we aren't thinking straight we end up doing wrong things. so i will apologies for that i hope your novel successed i have wrote a review for the few first chapters i read, although i think you may need to rework some chapters over all its passable. I wont go into details on how to make your first novel succeed here but i do advice you to check that out or check what currently the new novels are doing to attract viewers because honestly your novel isn't bad at all, and yeah that's it. good luck

I read till Chapter 10 and this is a review for the first 10 chapters. This actually good first the story line is unique although a bit fast paced for my taste second the characters design surfaces through their actions and body language I am pretty impressed by this although this should come at later stage of the novel and you should focus more the MC in the first chapters. But all in all this is really good i enjoyed reading it. And finally this is out of topic and not part of the review this genuinely my advice, you have a great novel i have some guesses why its not doing great and most importantly i think you started slow. Just so you know if you manage to release more than 15 k words in your novel for first month you will enter the top starlet novels on the main page for 5 days, and that's where you get your first batch of readers, people who will like your novel will end up reading it and sharing it with their friends of course stable update is a must later on but for now i am just talking about the first 30 k viewers. Good luck, i would love to see this book succeed.