Webnovel Author: iAlexKing - Fanfic Collection

Man, I don't know if it's possible or even if Peter has the knowledge. But it would be interesting if he could recreate Haki from One Piece. I believe that it would be a power set that is not only possible, but very well structured for the various powers of the force. And I believe it would be even more possible with the connection to the strength that Peter possesses. And also a game changer for physical power with Armament Haki. Thanks for the chapter.

Bruh... I didn't know about this one. Thanks.

Does anyone for God's sake know the Author's Discord?

Ohhhh! thanks.

Shit!!! The guy broke down mentally now. Hahahaha I was sincerely hoping for a system that would take the normal superman and would strengthen it. I didn't expect to be a Gacha with the luck of the guy being able to be Superboy Prime and other Superman's that I've never heard of. Is WTF is a Quantum Superman? Hahahahaha Thanks for the chapter.

I would say I'm not here for the fights, man. I just think the guy just extended this Konosuba bow just to say that they didn't even need to be there. Like, how many chapters were just for a comedy and he could put this in a more elaborate arc with an interesting twist. I will not say that I had predicted that I would go at the end of that arc and they would not be necessary there, but I already hoped that the story would focus on the guy they would have to kill not being a big deal and they would just break their heads trying to find the guy and in the meantime, he would be there, enjoying life. See, as much as I wasn't sure, it was almost the same thing I thought. And as I said I don't like the fights themselves, what I really like is the interaction of the main character, Leo and the Group, in strange and funny situations. Even because I in the first 15 chapters of that arc was really entertained, just what kind; This lasted chapters dearly, expecting a change to the least that is different, but simply the author made the same chapters with different situations. Of course that's just my opinion, man. And I'm not saying it's bad, only that it took away the excitement for chapters that I had at the beginning. Nowadays I arrive at the chapter with the thought of this arch ending and going to another one because it has already been repetitive. Whitebeard fighting frogs, Kaguya doing his own business, as well as the other members and Kazuma being the funny one in the group.

Man, I have to say that this endless arc from Konosuba just sucked up all my excitement for the story. Even the Fate arc that I didn't understand at all, I was crazy about new chapters. And not only that, after all the guys do in the world of Konosuba, they weren't even needed there? Doesn't that just make this arc a waste of time, centered simply on comedy? Seriously? I'm clearly disappointed, but wait to see if in the future the story will return to what it was at the beginning full of cool plots and crazy battles. Thanks for the chapter.

Man, I can officially say that you have reached the mark of staying in the same arc for chapters or episodes as Dragon Ball itself. Congratulations!

Yeah... It's just okay to have a harem, I'm not complaining. What really bothers me is the MC having a healthy and nice girl relationship. But whenever a girl shows interest in him the guy just thinks with the Penis.

I have to say that the only thing that makes me not like this story so much would be the infidelity of this MC. Dude if you want him to be with other girls at least you shouldn't even have done it in a healthy relationship with Ituska. It just makes me imagine the drama that this infidelity will give in the future and or, if it doesn't and Itsuka just accepts, it would only make the story plummet from good to bad quickly. In fact this story is starting to resemble the akikan40 stories where it starts very well and starts to spoil why the MC starts to think with the penis. Wait and see now.

That was what I was talking about in my last comment. This woman is powerful, she has connections, she doesn't need the MC to have her freedom. If she wants, she can seek that freedom alone. Thanks for the chapter.

Dude, it's simple you are creating a Fanfic, a reimagination of the original story. Having angry readers is always normal and honestly I am happy to finally see an ATG story with a different pair. I just hope she doesn't have NTR, even though I don't look like her Husband, I find that very unnecessary. Even because it is easy to see that she is not happy, but like thinking with me if she cheats on her husband now, what prevents her from doing the same with the MC if it suits her? (Literally only you are the author moving the chopsticks in the story.) So go deep and develop the story as you see fit. People have different tastes and want different things, it’s normal. This is personal taste. (I myself don’t like the thought that the character like the MC would act under his head just because there’s a woman who shows feelings for him. He always showed himself to be composed, so imagine that when she finds out you have feelings for him she tried to "attack" him and he took it for granted? Doesn't that mean that when exposed by a woman's feelings he is weak and would accept it without blinking?) And like, it's still a development with a person who's been in an unhappy marriage for years. It is easy for this woman to develop feelings for a person who is comforting her and trying to help and comfort her. See? I want to see an interesting development of this novel, but what just crosses my mind is something like the MC giving a lecture to the Husband, the guy being angry with the MC and thinking that he is being betrayed by someone weaker than him and then what will happen is that the MC defeated him, in the process ending their marriage and then giving them space to be together. OR WORSE, they let themselves go for a carnal moment and she cheats on her husband with the MC and the husband finds out and it's going to be all this fucking drama again. You see, I'm not defending the husband here. The guy simply ignores his wife to go after a woman who doesn't even care about his existence for 20 years, the MC and especially the woman has every right to do what I said up there. But as I said, a relationship like this for me is not at all interesting, even because it just reminds me that this is a history of cultivation which I honestly never had such a feeling exactly because the MC completely breaks my view of the world of cultivation. I don't read these stories and other ATG stories because I like the world, but I do read to see what the authors can reimagine in this ****ed up world. (I don't even follow ATG anymore, I drunk after I realized how ****ed up Yun Che is, raping women, abandoning others and etc ... The guy is ****ed up.) Man I wrote too much. Hahahahaha But what I want to pass on in this text brought to you by Google Translate, is that your story is very well written with the most captivating and interesting MC that you see from ATG and I honestly don't want to see you taking a cultivation story. May you continue to bring about these breaches of imagination that these cultivation stories have. And I sincerely hope when writing your romance, you don't do something just predictable and boring. Man, I think MC doesn't even get involved in their marriage, she is an *****, she can take care of herself and get freedom from this marriage alone or with an outside force. And honestly, she acts towards her and doesn't depend on the MC to give her freedom from an unhappy marriage. (In these cultivation stories, even though the female characters are ridiculously badass, they always tend to depend on a man. That doesn't make any sense, honestly!!!!!) Again, sorry for the letter. I just wanted to leave my thoughts on the story and what I hope it will continue to do. Thank you for the story and for showing that you care about the readers' opinion.

Dude, a great theory. But now you didn't say if it was the All-For-One who took his father himself so as not to hinder his successor's ascension, just killing the father of 17 would not make sense. That's because the power of 17's father is almost an All-For-One. So I don't think they would just kill him, even for what he got was impressive from a scientist's field. In other words, I have a great theory about this one: All-For-One caught him, but didn't kill him. He will use the 17's father to quite possibly create the Nomus, causing the 17's father to become a Nomu Boss or something like that. In these stories of heroes and villains, while heroes are always those who win, villains are always those who even after death somehow get out of hell and come to cause more problems. So I have no doubt that he will come back, especially when it ended that way.

Man, I saw this fanfic on the list there and I thought: oh, another reincarnation in an anime world with the powers of No. 17... Something new, I'll check. Then I started to read and when I finally read the first chapters, I find it interesting... He will leave there with the children and the heroes will help in some way and such. I saw the 41 chapters and thought that the escape would be what in 6-10 chapters, because honestly a person who is writing can think of an escape plan and such. But man, the story took all 41 episodes in the same thing and will still return in the future with his father now that he ran away and as much as the story is interesting and well written, man, it sucks as hell to see something you could have developed into 10 chapters being fragmented into several. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that the story is bad or I'm even saying that I didn't like it. But, honestly it is not something I would read in a more busy or tiring day. It is very extended face. You write too much, the characters, the interactions between them and everything else is hard to find here on the site where most of the time there are several people claiming meaningless stories. Only man, this 41 chapters, if you wanted I’m almost sure it would fit in at least 10 episodes. Man, this beginning that can be considered a prologue has 41 chapters. It reminded me of Dragon Ball Z fights. But even so, man, I really enjoyed reading, I will not go to every chapter, because I think it will take time to take action and catch the anime. But I will follow in after being number of chapters. Thanks for the story and good work.

Wow! Nunca pensei que você era um brasileiro. Vou no outro site ler essa fanfic nova então. No aguardo desta também.

Dude, is it just me that has the impression that this tamer is Kisuke or is he related to him in some way? Like, we never saw him in the dungeon to improve, it just shows the girls' point of view. And this guy came up, if I'm not mistaken after Kisuke helped Ais and this Tamer is aiming for her right away. It's too suspicious. Thanks for the chapter!

Well, since this mission started, I don't understand anything. For me Fate was always confused and that's why I drunk, seeing his fanfic just shows me that he was right. As cool as it is is so much bullshit. But I'm enjoying the story and following it. I hope it doesn't take long to finish this arc. Thanks for the chapters.

Excellent chapter! I didn't understand half of the chapter, but just excellent!