I like to read, so i decided to write as well to enjoy what i feel missing from my readings.
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Baba_4_u
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A Author giving his own work full rating, nothing surprising. I just wanted to say that i am trying my hardest to write a likeable story, but i am not very gifted when it comes to imagination and this is also my first novel. I will look forward toward to your criticism, so i may improve. This is a journey and i hope you will enjoy it as i will.
He sat there, under the moon
A vial of poison, to visit God soon
But God declined, and left him to the crow
Who tore his soul and dragged him low
His soul, now fractured, a silent scream
Caught between realms, in a waking dream
Choices are naught but to win or suffer
Because now he doesn't even have death to offer.
What would you do if your death resulted in eternal suffering, what can you do? Everyone dies at one point, it is the only absolute truth of life. Prabh has been asked this very question, He either let the crow free, a caged evil, or defeat that crow. He was ready to die but he refused to be beaten. So, can he win, or will he spend eternity as a senseless piece of soul, aware but useless? we will see.
A Author giving his own work full rating, nothing surprising. I just wanted to say that i am trying my hardest to write a likeable story, but i am not very gifted when it comes to imagination and this is also my first novel. I will look forward toward to your criticism, so i may improve. This is a journey and i hope you will enjoy it as i will.
An Ego of Defeated
Fantasy · Baba_4_u