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DesertRat: If the was real life, I would totally agree, but dude has a system, he deserves to suffer funny and embarrassing things, it's so satisfying to me 😋😄My Extraordinary Achievements · C127
The Dragoon in Skyrim · C2
lsoma: nahhh man your wak.... you just said it yourself. He wrote it in the authors notes not in the story........ like how tf are we supposed to know he suddenly forgets everything he knew when it isnt stated in the story ???? Plus throughout the story he mentions curtain parts he shouldnt know if that was the case. Many examples but one is saying where he wont let his sis go out with oscar and follow the dumb circus or something. So clearly he knows the story but authors just using it for convenience, something I despise cause it makes no fcking sense.
I agree with schnee tbh dont mind the looks cause tbh I grampa swords look better. However this could have easily been sorted out by writing about a mutation during birth where sword used his sp to help with the birth or something. Just lazy writing. Could have even just said he got his genes from sword and hes a distant relative or something.
Finally the thing that prob annoyed me most wasnt even how he forgot everything. Its the whole writing. I mean the block writing is bad enough then author goes and adds all the symbols and monologs every other line. Theres something called spacing out... his whole training arc I skipped cause I found it just so annoying to read. Plus when he did that test like my god why must you make a 1000 year move that complicated... all you had to say was he gains 25% atk while decreasing his opponents by 25%. not a whole chapter..
To me the story could have been interesting with his sword de buffing his enemies while buffing his at the same time then with his sword intent he could become op. However he suddenly becomes a defensive swordsmen ?? why ?? whats the point of his de buffs if his fighting style is defending ??? Obv to make him weaker for the story
to me the author has butchered his own story.Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword
Schnee_: WHAT I HATE THE MOST IS THE AUTHOR FORGOTTEN THE MC BACKGROUND I ADVICE HIM TO READ HIS OWN BOOK AND STUDY THEM AND FIND HIS ERRORS LIKE MC BACKGROUND HE IS REINCARNATED SOUL AND NOT NATURALLY BORN THERE SO HE MUST HAVE A KNOWLEDEGE OF SOUL LAND CUZ IT CLEARLY SAID HE LOVES READING AND SOULD LAND IS ONE OF THE TOP NOVELDouluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword
DaoOfNothing: the story is good but i don't like that he killed his mother.
😥😥😥My Hero Academia:"Just a bad day" · C3
Sabth3607: Don’t she is the single biggest slut In comics, she has dated nearly every main dc hero often while they were dating other people (every main member apart from Martian manhunter) and on a few occasions got pregnant as well then proceeded to ruin those relation ships and NTR’d them openly. She has also cheated on her partners repeatedly and even abused then and her biggest weakness is bondage. Luckily this is no longer cannon because of 2019’s political correctness.A New Hero in DC? · C12
DesertRat: Am I the only one waiting for the implosion when he finds out his crush is his new god-sister ??
I liked this chapter and progression, but everything in me is anxiously awaiting the family fun 😁My Extraordinary Achievements · C127
RAGNAROC511: Worthless BS, a stunt like this makes me NOT want to give you power stones and/or gifts EVER!
I'll stop at this point otherwise I'll rant, rave, and be rude to no point or effect. I bid you good day.Godly Devourer System · C49
kurosakichigo: MENG Fan should release a book containing his laughing faces. If anyone is sad then they can see that and laughMy Extraordinary Achievements · C125
Outi_Lehtinen: I’m sorry, but I think it’s completely ridiculous that Hela never heard or asked her own name in five years. FIVE YEARS! Wasn’t she ever curious at all?The Goddess of Death · C3
CDR_Grae: Thank you so much! I tried so hard to make it a 'realistic' reaction when a person does reincarnate. I know if that happens to me, I'll probably be in shock, cry for a while for all I left behind, learn as much as I could in the new life I have, and be determined to live my life to the fullest this time. I tried to apply that process to Hela and it looks like it worked! Thank you again and please stay tuned!The Goddess of Death · C2
Nidian: This chapter is an example how you make a reincarnator, who you can believe, that she reincarnated.
Great work👍The Goddess of Death · C2
AlmazDa: If the person Harley is talking about meeting up with is Ivy then the next chapter should be interesting. Ivy has a very similar outlook on the world as the Mc with the whole “indifference to killing humans” and can probably help the Mc organize his thoughts on the matter as she has much more experience with it. The Harley and Ivy dynamic has also always been very interesting, so I hope you can do it justice.
Anyway, great chapter and keep up the great work.😁👍DC: PROTOTYPE · C7
Illusory_Reality: Can you write a status auxillary chapter ??
Also....I have a suggestion for 2 more abilities :
1) time advancement =decay : advance the effect time has on things and biological creatures ..ageing people to ash and making elements radiate into nothingness
2) time backward :return things to the state when they were first created
3) a sub ability of the gravity arrays :stealing the weight of things permamently and encasing it in his gravity barrier/bag within himself ...can unleash it when he neads to increase and condense his weight and thus his strength
4) light control :create illusions ... can change the way he appears and create non-physical projectins
Maybe when proficient enough ...be able to travel at light speed
5) light lifeform : be able to use light stored within himself to breathe and get nutrients .....not needing oxygen or food (becoming superman in the process)Spacetime Anomaly: MHA Fanfic · C54
Spacetime Anomaly: MHA Fanfic · C50
MagMods: Just go for the 2 of them I mean others aren't important momo is over used and ochaco oh god talk about a plain character those 2 were the only 2 aside from the girl that shrinks stuffsSpacetime Anomaly: MHA Fanfic · C33
Shameless_Buddha: *flips table excitedly*Gifting this Unfortunate Guy with Blessings · C0
Nirvanic_Sun: ┬─┬ノ( º _ ºノ)(╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻Gifting this Unfortunate Guy with Blessings · C0
Daoist666017: *flips table*Gifting this Unfortunate Guy with Blessings · C0
Daijena: Could someone explain to me why Chris should be with Jason? She has so many high relationships with other boys and I don't get why they aren't recognized as potential targets. Author please help. :cHarry Potter and the Fortunate Queen · C78
Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen · C75
Rakokus69: Kill.. Just kill him.. Kill RON.. Eh, what I mean kill RAT..Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen · C58
leonel551: Okey im dropping here should just read DxD as this shouldn't even be call a fanfiction! As the MC is nothing but a side character that sometimes has to fight, if it was not for the mysterious background (as he is from a different world) i bet no one will ever bother with him!Reborn: Ulquiorra in DxD world · C46
azurekite: If you suddenly had the power to go to different fantasy worlds and anime and could still go back to your own world would you be 100% certain that your world isn't just another fantasy world instead of the so called real worldAbsolute Fantasy · C3
In_Human: If two pure bloods have a child then shouldn’t the child also be pure blood and not 50%Otsutsuki In Mutiverse · C5
LordTouchMe: What a horrible father. I'm glad he's taking in the kids! Thanks for the chapter!Overlord and the Seraphim · C32
Overlord and the Seraphim · C32
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