Webnovel Author: LookingForOnlineGF - Fanfic&Novel Collection

LookingForOnlineGF

5mth

Commented

Chat gpt?

Here's the improved version of that part of the chapter:

LookingForOnlineGF

5mth

Commented

It feels like you've added tons of descriptors for no reason to increase the word count. Not a big fan of that, the story itself is fun, but it is noticeably making it less so.

ch 52 Chapter 52 - A New Quest

Internet Cafe in a Fantasy World

Fantasy · Meagerton

LookingForOnlineGF

9mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter :)

ch 54 IMUC-CHAPTER 54 LARGE-SCALE WAR

I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards

Movies · DarkShadow95

LookingForOnlineGF

9mth

Commented

Thanks for editing this. Hope you continue :)

ch 51 IMUC-CHAPTER 51 COLORLESS CARD

I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards

Movies · DarkShadow95

LookingForOnlineGF

1yr

Commented

What happened to the translation quality?

ch 42 Chapter 42 experience being an Empress

LookingForOnlineGF

1yr

Commented

?????

The soul controlling fruit still required 9,999,806 points of fear to mature.

Becoming Invincible By Absorbing Emotions

Eastern · Pure Drop Mushroom

LookingForOnlineGF

1yr

Commented

If they can take multiple pills, why not buy more low % pills. Sounds like that would be cheaper.

The value of the pill would increase by tens or even dozens of times!

Scientifically Cultivating In An Unscientific World

Eastern · Cultivation Teacher

LookingForOnlineGF

1yr

Commented

???? What happened to the turkey?

However, what was the evolution point, and what was its use?

Beast Awakening: Evolving Legendary Beasts

Sci-fi · Liquid Human

LookingForOnlineGF

1yr

Commented

Why are the translation quality of new novels so bad? It's lowering the reading experience so I can't judge properly if the novel is good or not.

With her current strength, she wouldn't be able to achieve it even if she cultivated for ten thousand years.

I Obtain An Immortal Heavenly Technique At The Start

Eastern · Crimson Flame Dragon God

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Replied to Aeternitas

Good question, I'm super confused. At first, I figured that his disciples killing all the He family members gave him enough points to increase his area all the way towards Thunder City, but if that was so he wouldn't be as passive as he is. I've no clue what's going on right now either, the whole tone of the novel just shifted suddenly. Could it be someone pretending to be him and he isn't actually there? All remains to be seen, even though the book has shifted a lot in tone, I'll still give it a couple more chapters as a chance to see a conclusion to why this happened.

ch 102 He Zhao's Choice

Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave the Mountain!

Eastern · Abundance Every Year

After Lin Qi heard about what had happened, he knew that both Yu Meng and Lewis were in danger. Lewis probably deserved it, but he did not deserve to die. Yu Meng was still so young, so she could not be that guy's wife.

Magic Land: I Make It Big as a Gourmet Food Supplier!

Eastern · The Might Of Leaving Blank

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Commented

So far so good :) Enjoying the story, please keep chapters coming!

ch 0 4 Chapter 4.

My blood is from Krypton, but I'm in Marvel. (Temporary pause.)

Movies · ArashiMikado

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Commented

I've enjoyed the story so far and I'm looking forward to future chapters :) Thanks for writing!

ch 23 New World

Multi space wanderer

Anime & Comics · Ghori4343

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Commented

Found the story today, and so far it is very promising. I hope you'll continue writing it and regain your excitement about it at some point.

ch 12 The Passage of Time II

Reborn as a Shoggoth But With Special Abilities (Dropped)

TV · Noodlemine

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Replied to Mirksas

I think it was mentioned that his parents died in a car accident? I’ve read a lot lately so i might be mixing up different fictions.

'Oh... Maria, if only you were here...' thought George about his late wife, the love of his life, and felt sad that he couldn't share his happiness with the person he had loved the most.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Commented

Wouldn’t it be possible to go to space and cool down the gold or whatever is needed to do?

Currently, there weren't any known existences of Absolute Zero material in the entire magical world.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

LookingForOnlineGF

2yr

Commented

Why are they sharing ability information. Its the most stupid thing to do.

I was soon introduced to Elezar and his wife Carmen who were nice vampires Eleazar was studying me carefully as he asked: "You have an interesting ability from what Carlisle said you have the ability to copy other people's abilities ."