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  • Tales Of Demons and Gods : Dao Of Patience

    Tales Of Demons and Gods : Dao Of Patience

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    4.3

    One fine day waking up our protagonist finds himself reborn in Tales Of Demons and Gods reborn as Ye Han. ======================= Disclaimer - I do not own anything related to the Tales of Demons and Gods and as for the cover, I found it on google so no idea where it is really from ( I'll update things when I find out) either way, this is just a fanfic so I doubt I can be sued anyways, but since everyone is making a Disclaimer as it is it ohh well.

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He's got a dragon sacred gear, would be tough to add gate of Babylon here. View More

CompleteNoob: I suggest giving him abilities that is not widely used, for example Gate of Babylon/Boosted Gear is almost used everywhere so it does not give much excitement. I would suggest you create a unique Longinus that has similar functions instead.

Also, don't make your character too overpowered otherwise you will be stuck writing a "Spice of Life" kind of novel since there will be no powerful enemies that can take on the MC head to head.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C45
34 minutes ago
I really feel awkward saying this but can u please **** Issei up ? From what I can guess is that u plan on taking the orignal route ( More or less ) with regards to the storyline.

Just a request make it so that when he wakes up after the fallen angel incident ( The one after he became a devil) he doesn't wake up with Rias by his side, rather an old ugly devil or someone of the same sex to creep him out.

To add a 🍒 on top his mother might consider him gay and the incident destroys his hopes for a harem. 😁👍 View More

CompleteNoob: Issei will only become "visible" in Volume 4 lol xD

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C45
37 minutes ago

Obito_Tobi: anti hero ans ruthless mc is always used and all of them fail in no more than 10 chapters

also you said his strength is great so how the hell he punch those thugs and only seems like norma punchs

and your explaining for his strength suck it's nowhere the level of superman

saying he can lift a car with one hand not comparable to superman by anyway

he got whitebeard (insane level of strength in one piece characters can carry 100 of tons easily )
meliodas a demon insane strength and speed very very fast and very strong that he took and swing a stick to cut a mountain
madara strength is also great and note this sharingan can't change between tomoes if it's three it will alwats be three whenever activated so need to correct this too

also nagumo himself is very strong since he ate a lot of monsters and very strong ones but to put it simple you only write things in words but your explain about the powers is shame to them all another thing


this is the way all the dc , marvel fanfic with mc got a lot of peoples powers

most of the powers will be either left unused or used once or two time then never used again

simply put you are just your regular fanfic author that will drop

cause things are not stable at all



your best will be 5 chapters before things get ruined

cause you refuse to accept that justice league not killing is not just pride of sh'it but to be also better example for people for justice is not killing bad

and also a lot of peiple have some reasons for what they do


i friendly advise start looking at big picture not limitting your imagination , second do think about future if you want to write , simple put should build the future from now not just looking at the present trying to come with idea to make together for the chapter you write this will cause you a lot of problems where you will get a lot of writer stop in the near future



i know you didn't plan the future in case you just start to squeeze ideas from your head when writing a chapter trying hard to make it related to the prevuous one


if you want to be an author simply suggest don't plan for the present or the short run

but for the future and long run and try think twice before writing


other than that grammar mistakes
and go with overused boring things like anti hero all fanfic about dc and marvel are anti hero and ruthless mc kill villains and worst a harem in modern wirld they are simply horny trying to imaginating mc banging multi womens of dc , marvel

simply they are not authors but writers and those are different


so either put your best and you will get rewarded for your effort

or make some half ass writing and will write two pitifull chapters and drop




this is from ly point of view

YOUNG JUSTICE:REBIRTH · C1
2 days ago
It took me two hours to consider if I still wanted to read this bull**** ( Stil ended up reading either way), now all I can say is that Mad Snail has made up his with this novel and if wasn't for the contract even this chapter wouldn't be released. Too much bull**** yas gone on and even the Master of the Nether Realm yas been forgotten after Nei Li finally got his daughter. View More
Tales of Demons and Gods · C484
2 days ago
Idk, ask the Author... View More

hautar: I'm trying to say that is he going to keep translation it after 5 or not??

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter
6 days ago
What are you trying to say ? View More

hautar: Do you will translate it??

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter
6 days ago
There is a korean novel which goes by the same name, and since it's posted in the fanfic section that should be enough of an answer I suppose. View More

EijiSeishuu: this fanfic original or novel korea???




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SSS-Class Suicide Hunter
6 days ago
Like I said story's good 👍 View More

CompleteNoob: Well from reading the OG novel there are people that should be more powerful are actually weak and weak are powerful :/ But I will write according to my understanding and try to keep it as realistically as possible

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C34
1 week ago
..... So are you confused with the power balance by any chance ?

Good story but a messed up and confused power balance. View More
How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C34
1 week ago
He changed it. So its time I find and remove the comment, thanks for letting me know. 👍 View More

Taitiruk: Guess either you read it wrong or the author fixed it, cus it says that he is using a spear.

Is It wrong for a Gamer to be in the Dungeon?: Familia Myth of Zetta · C13
4 weeks ago
The snail has finally lost it... Ohh wait he was always mad to begin with 😒 View More
Tales of Demons and Gods · C483
1 month ago
Each gear is unique, no second copy regardless of how good or bad they are. Will just take a second name it something else with a similar power 👍 View More

CompleteNoob: Search adramelech Family, their a extra devil clan apart from the 72 pillars

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories · C7
1 month ago

ZGearCecil: Rewritten~

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Rewrite ..? Well you do have a good idea just edit it to make sense? I mean u don't have to do the same thing in the same order as the orignal this is your fanfic after all, just make sure the chalters u write connects with other.

There are quite a few countries here and you don't need to follow any fixed path either, let your imagination run wild as there is a lot you can do here.

..... Re-reading what I wrote up is now kinda stupid what I simply ment is a lot of things badly need to be edited

and if u decide to rewrite there is a lot of room to put in a new character, many countries too much space to make your own story.

Up to you and I'll remove the review and comments in a day so as to not spoil your review section 👍 View More

ZGearCecil: Now that's a review. From your opinion, Should I rewrite?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Rewrite ..? Well you do have a good idea just edit it to make sense? I mean u don't have to do the same thing in the same order as the orignal this is your fanfic after all, just make sure the chalters u write connects with other.

There are quite a few countries here and you don't need to follow any fixed path either, let your imagination run wild as there is a lot you can do here.

..... Re-reading what I wrote up is now kinda stupid what I simply ment is a lot of things badly need to be edited

and if u decide to rewrite there is a lot of room to put in a new character, many countries too much space to make your own story.

Up to you and I'll remove the review and comments in a day so as to not spoil your review section 👍 View More

ZGearCecil: Now that's a review. From your opinion, Should I rewrite?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Rewrite ..? Well you do have a good idea just edit it to make sense? I mean u don't have to do the same thing in the same order as the orignal this is your fanfic after all, just make sure the chalters u write connects with other.

There are quite a few countries here and you don't need to follow any fixed path either, let your imagination run wild as there is a lot you can do here.

..... Re-reading what I wrote up is now kinda stupid what I simply ment is a lot of things badly need to be edited

and if u decide to rewrite there is a lot of room to put in a new character, many countries too much space to make your own story.

Up to you and I'll remove the review and comments in a day so as to not spoil your review section 👍 View More

ZGearCecil: Now that's a review. From your opinion, Should I rewrite?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Review incorrect point taken, world baground stays 1*, Stability of update stays 5*, Character Development stays 1* ( The story literally just has the mc properly informed) and as for not liking how the story develops mate .... Please don't get me started Ainz made his move throughout the story trying find another player or ally and here he does his own thing while the mc goes off mixing around with NPC who literally have no problem with him being a lich not to mention the character u made though novel and kinda new makes no sense. The reason why Ainz is able to calm down would be the green light which does not come from him being an Undead rather take it as a passive skill like Gamers Mind.

The party got ranked up to platinum.. wow cool lets go for an escort mission, the mc made a name for himself wow lets go for an escort mission.. the said missions rank : Silver, he could rather go to the capital get info and find around a way back home and what does he do ?

So if you have something to say ** make sure it atleast follows some logic because from where I'm reading this novel is nothing but a self insert and let me repeat some actions in story happened because of another action, here you have removed the first one and yet still the 2nd action (reaction happens). If u still dont get it here it is in simple : Sam went to Boston (Action 1), Sam made friends in Boston (Action 2). Action 2 only happened because of Action 1 took place, IN YOUR story you have simply removed Action 1 and yet Action 2 still happens and your reaction : Both have different personalities so they behave differently.

Goes to a new world finds an acquaintance, does not go and meet them runs away knowing whats coming ? seriously ? View More

ZGearCecil: 1. He can see them from the balcony.
2. It's stated he knows they're weaker than him, lower leveled, via magic spells to see this.
3. Cipher isn't Ainz. Logic? Everyone's thought process is different, in which common sense is warped. He saw living information at his doorstep, living beings he could coerce.
4. You're not reviewing this well because its not moving the way you thought it would? What ever happened to Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, World Background?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Review incorrect point taken, world baground stays 1*, Stability of update stays 5*, Character Development stays 1* ( The story literally just has the mc properly informed) and as for not liking how the story develops mate .... Please don't get me started Ainz made his move throughout the story trying find another player or ally and here he does his own thing while the mc goes off mixing around with NPC who literally have no problem with him being a lich not to mention the character u made though novel and kinda new makes no sense. The reason why Ainz is able to calm down would be the green light which does not come from him being an Undead rather take it as a passive skill like Gamers Mind.

The party got ranked up to platinum.. wow cool lets go for an escort mission, the mc made a name for himself wow lets go for an escort mission.. the said missions rank : Silver, he could rather go to the capital get info and find around a way back home and what does he do ?

So if you have something to say ** make sure it atleast follows some logic because from where I'm reading this novel is nothing but a self insert and let me repeat some actions in story happened because of another action, here you have removed the first one and yet still the 2nd action (reaction happens). If u still dont get it here it is in simple : Sam went to Boston (Action 1), Sam made friends in Boston (Action 2). Action 2 only happened because of Action 1 took place, IN YOUR story you have simply removed Action 1 and yet Action 2 still happens and your reaction : Both have different personalities so they behave differently.

Goes to a new world finds an acquaintance, does not go and meet them runs away knowing whats coming ? seriously ? View More

ZGearCecil: 1. He can see them from the balcony.
2. It's stated he knows they're weaker than him, lower leveled, via magic spells to see this.
3. Cipher isn't Ainz. Logic? Everyone's thought process is different, in which common sense is warped. He saw living information at his doorstep, living beings he could coerce.
4. You're not reviewing this well because its not moving the way you thought it would? What ever happened to Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, World Background?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Review incorrect point taken, world baground stays 1*, Stability of update stays 5*, Character Development stays 1* ( The story literally just has the mc properly informed) and as for not liking how the story develops mate .... Please don't get me started Ainz made his move throughout the story trying find another player or ally and here he does his own thing while the mc goes off mixing around with NPC who literally have no problem with him being a lich not to mention the character u made though novel and kinda new makes no sense. The reason why Ainz is able to calm down would be the green light which does not come from him being an Undead rather take it as a passive skill like Gamers Mind.

The party got ranked up to platinum.. wow cool lets go for an escort mission, the mc made a name for himself wow lets go for an escort mission.. the said missions rank : Silver, he could rather go to the capital get info and find around a way back home and what does he do ?

So if you have something to say ** make sure it atleast follows some logic because from where I'm reading this novel is nothing but a self insert and let me repeat some actions in story happened because of another action, here you have removed the first one and yet still the 2nd action (reaction happens). If u still dont get it here it is in simple : Sam went to Boston (Action 1), Sam made friends in Boston (Action 2). Action 2 only happened because of Action 1 took place, IN YOUR story you have simply removed Action 1 and yet Action 2 still happens and your reaction : Both have different personalities so they behave differently.

Goes to a new world finds an acquaintance, does not go and meet them runs away knowing whats coming ? seriously ? View More

ZGearCecil: 1. He can see them from the balcony.
2. It's stated he knows they're weaker than him, lower leveled, via magic spells to see this.
3. Cipher isn't Ainz. Logic? Everyone's thought process is different, in which common sense is warped. He saw living information at his doorstep, living beings he could coerce.
4. You're not reviewing this well because its not moving the way you thought it would? What ever happened to Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, World Background?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Review incorrect point taken, world baground stays 1*, Stability of update stays 5*, Character Development stays 1* ( The story literally just has the mc properly informed) and as for not liking how the story develops mate .... Please don't get me started Ainz made his move throughout the story trying find another player or ally and here he does his own thing while the mc goes off mixing around with NPC who literally have no problem with him being a lich not to mention the character u made though novel and kinda new makes no sense. The reason why Ainz is able to calm down would be the green light which does not come from him being an Undead rather take it as a passive skill like Gamers Mind.

The party got ranked up to platinum.. wow cool lets go for an escort mission, the mc made a name for himself wow lets go for an escort mission.. the said missions rank : Silver, he could rather go to the capital get info and find around a way back home and what does he do ?

So if you have something to say ** make sure it atleast follows some logic because from where I'm reading this novel is nothing but a self insert and let me repeat some actions in story happened because of another action, here you have removed the first one and yet still the 2nd action (reaction happens). If u still dont get it here it is in simple : Sam went to Boston (Action 1), Sam made friends in Boston (Action 2). Action 2 only happened because of Action 1 took place, IN YOUR story you have simply removed Action 1 and yet Action 2 still happens and your reaction : Both have different personalities so they behave differently.

Goes to a new world finds an acquaintance, does not go and meet them runs away knowing whats coming ? seriously ? View More

ZGearCecil: 1. He can see them from the balcony.
2. It's stated he knows they're weaker than him, lower leveled, via magic spells to see this.
3. Cipher isn't Ainz. Logic? Everyone's thought process is different, in which common sense is warped. He saw living information at his doorstep, living beings he could coerce.
4. You're not reviewing this well because its not moving the way you thought it would? What ever happened to Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, World Background?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Review incorrect point taken, world baground stays 1*, Stability of update stays 5*, Character Development stays 1* ( The story literally just has the mc properly informed) and as for not liking how the story develops mate .... Please don't get me started Ainz made his move throughout the story trying find another player or ally and here he does his own thing while the mc goes off mixing around with NPC who literally have no problem with him being a lich not to mention the character u made though novel and kinda new makes no sense. The reason why Ainz is able to calm down would be the green light which does not come from him being an Undead rather take it as a passive skill like Gamers Mind.

The party got ranked up to platinum.. wow cool lets go for an escort mission, the mc made a name for himself wow lets go for an escort mission.. the said missions rank : Silver, he could rather go to the capital get info and find around a way back home and what does he do ?

So if you have something to say ** make sure it atleast follows some logic because from where I'm reading this novel is nothing but a self insert and let me repeat some actions in story happened because of another action, here you have removed the first one and yet still the 2nd action (reaction happens). If u still dont get it here it is in simple : Sam went to Boston (Action 1), Sam made friends in Boston (Action 2). Action 2 only happened because of Action 1 took place, IN YOUR story you have simply removed Action 1 and yet Action 2 still happens and your reaction : Both have different personalities so they behave differently.

Goes to a new world finds an acquaintance, does not go and meet them runs away knowing whats coming ? seriously ? View More

ZGearCecil: 1. He can see them from the balcony.
2. It's stated he knows they're weaker than him, lower leveled, via magic spells to see this.
3. Cipher isn't Ainz. Logic? Everyone's thought process is different, in which common sense is warped. He saw living information at his doorstep, living beings he could coerce.
4. You're not reviewing this well because its not moving the way you thought it would? What ever happened to Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design, World Background?

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
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「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
1 month ago
Would leave a review when there are more chapters but the comment above sums up everything 👍 View More

amaturewriter: Look I read this so here is a review....I hope that this isn't one of those bs fanfic where an abused MC grows strong and then later forgive his family for the neglect and he protects the village...nonono....

I want some cold realistic **** where the MC doesn't forgive and theres no redemption, characters are bashed and punished and they' wallow in regret and sadness...I want the people to regret it and yet no bonds will be mended..Abuse and neglect arnt forgiven honestly no matter the reason...And no BS of prophecy will be followed...MC is free and one man army

also make MC godlike and add some good romance and fluff...

Now I hope that it wont be a generic BS ****!!

Namikaze Naruto
1 month ago

amaturewriter: Look I read this so here is a review....I hope that this isn't one of those bs fanfic where an abused MC grows strong and then later forgive his family for the neglect and he protects the village...nonono....

I want some cold realistic **** where the MC doesn't forgive and theres no redemption, characters are bashed and punished and they' wallow in regret and sadness...I want the people to regret it and yet no bonds will be mended..Abuse and neglect arnt forgiven honestly no matter the reason...And no BS of prophecy will be followed...MC is free and one man army

also make MC godlike and add some good romance and fluff...

Now I hope that it wont be a generic BS ****!!

Namikaze Naruto
1 month ago
... i dont even know what to say, he lost his naivety fine -_- so he cant control his emotions either ? Fine real mature so then what do u expect next he lost his skill to cause he got his @ss handed to him even with a doujutsu ? He was far too Op at the end of the orignal series and as per this fanfiction if he went after the Okotsuki clan he was far more Op and yet here he is going back doing the same old **** ? I mean shouldn't his priority be to either stop obito, black zetsu and pain first before going back to the 5th grade attitude problem ? Might as well recruit any and every good ninja to prepare for the Okotsuki rather than kill them off -_- View More

_SupremeBeing_: Well, he is very kind to his family and friends but completely ruthless and cold towards his enemies, y'know, after seeing his entire village and family dead, he lost his naivety of letting his enemies go, this is also why he exterminated the Otsutsuki clan.

Naruto: Space-Time Lord · C13
1 month ago
Reading Status: C21
... Dont know if I should even leave a review this bad but this fanfic literally makes no sense. Cant understand if there is any plot or story here ( Well in a way its better this way than what a lot of bs Light novels are doing as it is though).

Random characters keep coming up ( Fine u need to make them but what's the big deal making them super Op )

Did not suit my taste but not a bad fanfic, deserves an overall higher rating (3*+) but when rating individually its coming down to 2.2* View More
The Gamer - Naruto World
2 months ago

Raze_: I'm only on the second page and the horrible grammar is already burning my eyes.

mahouka koukou no rettousei a dating system · C1
2 months ago

Lize: Why i feel i read some mtl novel..
Sad... 😅😅😅

mahouka koukou no rettousei a dating system · C1
2 months ago
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Gate: War of Two Worlds
2 months ago
Nope just a long break which is mearly over ( Real life issues... ) View More

gurv0429: Is this story drop hope it not because it was getting to be great

Tales Of Demons and Gods : Dao Of Patience · C19
2 months ago
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