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  • Hm... let see what to say. Well, forget it long story short enjoy to read in my free time. So if you have any book recommendations not only including light novels send it my way.

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Pavan1234: There are some recent reviews about this novel which criticized this novel for stupid reasons (atleast in my opinion)which have been bothering me. Those reasons are :

A) character development of Mc : this is the plot point that I started dislike as I read more novels. These character development for very predictable, for me, as most of the time they done in same ways. They are
1) Inexperienced child Mc facing a lot problems with stupid decisions and misunderstandings to become an experienced(still not smart) *****.(this way is seen in most of shounen stories. So, I got bored by these plots and started to hate and avoid them.)

2)with a sad and tragic backstory of some smart guy Mc with debatable bad quality. (the chances of this way being good and well written are low.)

B) Second one is about some guy complaining about how this novel's Mc learning Legilimency without any help from books or teachers and time it took this Mc was too low. Buddy what you're reading are reading is a fictional novel where 99% of times Mc are known to create miracle or make the impossible possible.


My advice for above types of complainers, please only read shounen stories ( for a proper character development) for those that need character development and for those that don't want miracles done by Mc in novels, stop reading the novels and live your normal day lives( as in our normal life there will be no one that can make impossible possible).

The following features are what I search for in novel :

1) start with a interesting idea.

2) unique Mc (no need for character development).

3) clever and funny character interactions.

4) most of the time fast paced novels attracts me.

5) an proper ending. This is a very quality most novels don't have in Webnovel.

I wrote all this because after a long time I am reading a good fast paced harry Potter fanfiction with slightly unique Mc. Please don't discourage the author.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
2 days ago
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The Pleasure Lord · C60
2 days ago

silvertest: Do you think his real mom was reborn as well since she was sucked in by the book too?

The Pleasure Lord · C3
2 days ago
Lol yeah it and the mother could be casually holding a conversation while watch the mc actions inside the book. View More

Technoris: I’m more interested in if the missile was reborn

The Pleasure Lord · C3
2 days ago

Technoris: I’m more interested in if the missile was reborn

The Pleasure Lord · C3
2 days ago
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King of Sports · C90
2 days ago

CloudLegend: Do you all realize how awesome this novel would be if he wasn't a kid who keeps grudges and still loves the same girl after 500 years, he is nothing like a cultivator, like at all

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C38
4 days ago
Kid who keeps grudges? Who doesn't. And just because he's a cultivated for a period he cannot have one true love,and has to come back all indifferent like the rest of the MC in this situation. View More

CloudLegend: Do you all realize how awesome this novel would be if he wasn't a kid who keeps grudges and still loves the same girl after 500 years, he is nothing like a cultivator, like at all

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C38
4 days ago
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King of Sports · C89
4 days ago
Nice to know☺I was just curious about the overall situation as I pick up ur novel yesterday and thanks for the response. View More

Elzurdomaldito: I have some little time to write right now, between my new job and my studies and to make things worse when I have some time I took a long time before I start writing something.
So, what I do? I keep a long log of voice recordings about I want to to do in the story.
I have planed until now 4 worlds and idk maybe 5...

2nd life in DC comics and... · C12
4 days ago

Elzurdomaldito: I have some little time to write right now, between my new job and my studies and to make things worse when I have some time I took a long time before I start writing something.
So, what I do? I keep a long log of voice recordings about I want to to do in the story.
I have planed until now 4 worlds and idk maybe 5...

2nd life in DC comics and... · C12
4 days ago

Juto: In my opinion Mind power has always been a form of existence in many if not all worlds. Whether or not it is put to use (subconsciously or not) is determined by the world occupants discovery it or a form of it.

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago
Lol happy to help ☺anyways It's basically is what you are saying " the power of mind" but telepathy, and telekinesis are not mind power but a resulting action through the use of mind power View More

CapGrizzlyBear1203: Great thanks for the reply, you just made it vaguer and confusing for me... Why can't mind power just me the power of the mind, like how strong of a will someone has... Why doesn't the author just say it's like telepathy or telekinesis or some tele-power...

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago

CapGrizzlyBear1203: Great thanks for the reply, you just made it vaguer and confusing for me... Why can't mind power just me the power of the mind, like how strong of a will someone has... Why doesn't the author just say it's like telepathy or telekinesis or some tele-power...

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago

Elzurdomaldito: I am trying to do a mass release

2nd life in DC comics and... · C12
5 days ago
Love it so far, do you think this would be picked backed up or do you have some other writings View More

Elzurdomaldito: I am trying to do a mass release

2nd life in DC comics and... · C12
5 days ago
I do not know why I actually like the cover, it is what caught my attention to the novel in the first place (glad it did) View More

Auren02: What? Embarrassed to put it in the library?

Gamer Naruto · C42
5 days ago

Auren02: What? Embarrassed to put it in the library?

Gamer Naruto · C42
5 days ago
In my opinion Mind power has always been a form of existence in many if not all worlds. Whether or not it is put to use (subconsciously or not) is determined by the world occupants discovery it or a form of it. View More

CapGrizzlyBear1203: Mindpower is a very vague concept that doesn't make sense in my opinion. It doesn't fit with the Naruto world so I don't know how strong it is, if it's a cheat (probably is), and if it would even work ro exist. I mean like the clan that has made this technique didn't seem to have mind power.

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago

CapGrizzlyBear1203: Mindpower is a very vague concept that doesn't make sense in my opinion. It doesn't fit with the Naruto world so I don't know how strong it is, if it's a cheat (probably is), and if it would even work ro exist. I mean like the clan that has made this technique didn't seem to have mind power.

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago

Auren02: It'll make sense very late in the story but if you want an explanation as to why Mind Power works with the Nara clan techniques then reread the last portion of chapter 38 that says the Yin Element is just like Mind Power except that the Yin Element can give shape to nothingness and make it something like a toothpick or a phone while Mind Power has unique capabilities that unknown to Naruto for now.

Hope that satisfies you.

Gamer Naruto · C40
5 days ago

Auren02: Maybe for an original story but not for fanfics. I don't deserve the money for it. And I did mention that I upload about 3-4 chapter randomly in a week so I'm sorry for those that are suffering but that's all my time allows me to do.

Gamer Naruto · C35
5 days ago

Auren02: Potent Transformation. Its ability is accuracy and credibility so it basically creates hormones for Naruto due to it. And yes, in his transformed state, he can do the dirty but it's not gonna happen. I thought everyone would get the point.

Gamer Naruto · C33
5 days ago
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King of Sports · C87
5 days ago

phamtonbullet: Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go:

1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu.

2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it.

3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved.

3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on.

4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v)

5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week:

- Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter
- Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters
- Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chapters

I will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters.

6) I usually post 1 chapter per day.

7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for?

Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!

The supreme sovereign system
6 days ago
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King of Sports · C85
1 week ago
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King of Sports · C84
1 week ago

SykoNex: That's the good thing about marvel. There are so many redicuously broken people him being op isn't much of a problem. Just makes fight scenes annoying.

Morningstar of Sin · C3
1 week ago
I like where this going, just stick to your original plans no need to change for us.

Thanks for the Chapter😀 View More
Morningstar of Sin · C3
1 week ago
Really like both of your creations, so I do not mind the pace just keep them coming😀 View More

Hartman: This was Marvel we were talking about. And yes, there was a helicopter already in WW2 in our real world, not mention the more advanced Marvel.

Even though no helicopter was showed in WW2 in the Captain America movie, but the helicopter was there.

Correct me if I wrong.

Absolute Stealing · C33
1 week ago
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