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Aces_Mark: I hope you dont drop this story because of these comments

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

tekite: Dropped. You are just a fan of this **** that you are willing to go to any length to protect it. By your logic, I can just make up some ****ty ass power that is able to erase anybody from existing. They are not able to defend against it, they cant stop it, they cant go back in time or literally do anything to prevent that. Boom, its done and they are just erased from any and everything. For all of time and space, infinity or whatever. Your beloved vampire cant do anything against it. Why? Because I made it so. He will just poof. You are making that same argument here. Why even write this novel? Why even bother making an MC, if u just wanted to suck this *****'s troll cock? Literally meaningless. You made the MC OP just so you can highlight how much more OP that nigga is lmao. First time I am seeing an author with such strange convictions lmao. Kaleidoscope my ass. I can write a novel that says my MC has Infinity-Time-Space-Reality-Fiction-Nothingness Destroyer power and he can never be killed, destroyed or damaged or even be affected by any power and can erase anything from everywhere and anywhere at will and it cant be defended or reverted unless by his will, and be done with it. That MC is probably more interesting than that troll vampire you seem to love so much, and most definitely stronger. Would make a much better high ceiling for your novel than this little misconstructed little **** that is literal annoyance if you wanted somebody stronger than your MC.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

Mortifer: Yeah, you can expect a sharp drop in popularity hahaha. Introduce a troll, get trolled for it.

Remove him from the story? No
1 star flood and removal from library? Possibly yes.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: I already read all other people comment and let me help you to resume it.
1. You are doing a bad move pulling zelretch into dxd universe. It is not you can't but not the time yet. It was simply too fast
2. You are doing bad things by making zelretch doing **** he do. He may be troll but not in that way. Stealing ? Maybe yes. Sex? I don't think so, the way to do it better is by taking aprhodite and dump her into MC. While it may be looks like i want MC to blablabla you know that. It was the most logical ways about what zelretch will do. He is more like background player than main actor.
3. The dimensional gap is 2 way door. And you cant come in or out easily. That is why even if we can say yes for zelretch it is not necessary yes for other. On this case valerie. And rizevim goal is to cross the gap.
4. Zelretch isn't invincible and even if he can go to the old timeline. If in the future you kill all zelretch on the same time, he will still die. I don't know is it right or not but maybe type mercury can do that.
So, what is your main problem you need to do now?
1. The peace treaty because it was closest. And i agree that it was main priority
2. Cause effect of what zelretch do... You can't just leave it like that

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

SYFL555: Fk off author stop changing ID just to write good Shiet about yourself.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

After_Wing: Stupid, you already made it clear back then he can't pass through to DxD because of Ophis and Great Red in the Dimensional Gap that prevented anyone from the other side reaching to DxD world. Zelretch didn't take a pissed to able to pass through.
Now you made it worse, when you make MC heals him from his scars and wounds gained battling Crimson Moon back then.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

Ero_Usagi: Actually, it mostly because zelretch position in this novel is kind of, plot destroyer? And kind of irritating. That is why people want the mc to kill zelretch.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

Eyesoftruth: Although the the old vampire is powerful, he's not that overpowered. He's battle with type Moon is the evidence of that.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

hemynieka: Why add him in the first place? There's plenty of chaos already in dxd and the mc will visit other fics in the future for sure. Why add the vampire trolling ****.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

Lize: Its because the way you introduce that troll in prev chapter..
In less than 1 day.. he already create trouble..
Think about it if they know that the mc is friend with that troll..
He make enemy with entire greek faction in this case..
If greek faction join alliance with other faction..
Isnt that mean that zelretch making enemy for the entire alliance?
He already been seen as dangerous people after all..
Stealing the apple.. fucking aprodhite.. stealing the honey..
There is no way they gonna forgve him with only..
"sorry i just trolling.. here have them all back?"
😅😅😅
Atleast thats what i hate from the way you introduce him.. eventho i know zelretch personality.. but still.. its super annoying..
So.. you shouldnt be surprise that you got a lot of complain about zelretch..
😅😅😅

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago

SYFL555: Then why write this book??? Change your MC to that old vampire no?? If what u said is true, then why couldn't he come inside this verse before?? It was stated previously that RED and OPHIS is stronger than him. Shame that u are just making excuses for your poor plot with him. Just admit that u want free plot and easy way out with him.

Power Manipulator in Dxd · C27
1 week ago
in the end nothing changed from the original. bleh View More

After_Wing: Oh god, if only there was footage recording this battle. Because I mean, no one would believe a kid has fought together with All Might against a monster that absorbed physical attacks. The battle to this 3 is demigod level to the eyes of civilians and young heroes.

My Hero Academia - Saiyaman · C30
1 week ago
this mc is a retardo, couldve just use energy sword to behead the nomu. View More
My Hero Academia - Saiyaman · C29
1 week ago

Pripriri: Boring. His shadow clones is useless and mc is stupid and the most annoying is he is still 2 yrs old @.@.@@..@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@..@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.--.@.

Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill
1 week ago

Royal_Lurkers: I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.

So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

Aatrox, A God King in a Modern World.
3 weeks ago

tekite: So he is basically being a useless NPC in this story. The more he and his friends get stronger the enemies will somehow magically get stronger too. And this fucking dumbass will just watch from somewhere all the time when his friends are getting decimated by plot device enemies. Big fuking yikes. I bet every fucking noob thats gonna appear is gonna be insanely strong and this **** ass bald ***** will struggle to beat them, and will only act after someone dies.

I am Krillin! · C12
3 weeks ago
yall forgot his last jutsu he got from that guy he killed back at the orphanage, I feel like hes not ded yet. View More
《Infinite Stamina》 · C36
3 weeks ago
soo true View More

Fullmetal: Literally main character is such a moron, doesn't want to change story at all and watches as his girls suffer and their families die off.
As of chapter 18:
He watched Erza get taken away to the tower as a slave where she'll suffer for years and lose eye as a punishment for attempted escape..
He watched Mira,Lisana and Elfman lose their parents.
He watched Levy's grandmother die even after he said that he accepted her as his grandparent too. He was also "devastated" yet did nothing.

All of these just shows how little he cares about any of the girls he wants to be his. He should've changed their story, saved them when they needed saving. Why do they need to be as strong as in canon? There are also other ways to train them, it isn't impossible for someone to have a hellish training without actually having their families die to get strong.

Biggest problem for author is to actually be there when they are kids, if he actually made the MC start where story started in the anime, he wouldn't actually watch everything happen in cold blood just to have his story follow canon.

I Will Be The Harem King
4 weeks ago

Fullmetal: Literally main character is such a moron, doesn't want to change story at all and watches as his girls suffer and their families die off.
As of chapter 18:
He watched Erza get taken away to the tower as a slave where she'll suffer for years and lose eye as a punishment for attempted escape..
He watched Mira,Lisana and Elfman lose their parents.
He watched Levy's grandmother die even after he said that he accepted her as his grandparent too. He was also "devastated" yet did nothing.

All of these just shows how little he cares about any of the girls he wants to be his. He should've changed their story, saved them when they needed saving. Why do they need to be as strong as in canon? There are also other ways to train them, it isn't impossible for someone to have a hellish training without actually having their families die to get strong.

Biggest problem for author is to actually be there when they are kids, if he actually made the MC start where story started in the anime, he wouldn't actually watch everything happen in cold blood just to have his story follow canon.

I Will Be The Harem King
4 weeks ago
he couldve just ended the damn game already with that fist of his but author says no. View More
One Punch-Gamer · C4
4 weeks ago

Elsontiger987: I sort of like the story but the mc is all kinds of ****ed up.I get people hated yun che becouse he did manipulate kill and also rape one of his future wives.But doing and torturing and putting him throgh this and also manipulating the mc's future wives is no fucking difrent if not worse then what yun che did.yes he killed alot but who hasent in that kind of world and environment.yes he manipulated but he cared and risked his life for them.The mc is just basically going after what yun che would have.it just feels like childish and petty jealousy gone beyond yandere wifu level.it dosent even feel like the Mc will love them only goes for them becouse of there beauty.

He goes from being a hero saving a little girls life to being reincarnated as roach as he was a hero to manipulating xia qingyue with lies about being a self proclaimed hero to then torchering and tormenting Yun che mentally for I don't even no because he hadn't even said why he's don't it or why he hates yun che.so it's kind of ****ed up.but hey that's what fan fiction are these days.

So even tho people may like this type of genre it's not for me.

P.S And author if your resulting on deleting people's truthful opinions about you novel like my last review it means your insecure and dont like to see bad coments and reviews.And if so just think and read the reviews of all the people who do like you story and ignore the bad ones.you may think becouse I'm giving a low rating that I'm belittling your hard work because thats not the case at all.its just that I don't like this particular story structure and the Mc's personality.

You have great sentence structures.good punctuation you have thought of your plot and had it planed out unlike some where they just write it on the spot.(guilty as charged 😅😅😅)So have more confidence.good luck with you novel.

Against The Gods with an Anime System
1 month ago
Hey chill, Mc is a beta LOL View More

Pripriri: Thanks but I'm dropping this ****

Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C14
2 months ago

Pripriri: Thanks but I'm dropping this ****

Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C14
2 months ago

darkergrim: No i du not no da wae my broda







😝 lol

Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C9
2 months ago

WhiteHarambe: Do you know da wae broda?

Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C9
2 months ago

YourFutureHusbando: Lesson no. 5 i second that
Lesson no. 6 thanks for thr chap

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C33
2 months ago

Noob_kid: Lesson no.4 you need to update more

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C33
2 months ago

daryck: Are you going to continue the story?


























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Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic).
2 months ago
i cringe View More
Fallen Hero System · C8
3 months ago
uhhhh, there was other babies that were born at his time too. like the babies that chained cry when he cry so damn loud View More
Fallen Hero System · C5
3 months ago
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