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author, why is the label tragedy ?, someone important to the MC will die ?, if so, who ?, or refers to the past?View More View More
100 Race Conqueror
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-It was fine in my opinion, ´´all might´´ can pass the ´´one for all´´ to the MC, this would not enhance his quirk I think, it would only make when he hits with his haki, that blow is 100 times more powerful, but likewise, the MC would have to master it, and it would also give him the skills of the previous users, a great change could be, that when ´´all might´´ faces against ´´all for one´´, he dies defeating him, defeat to the final villain, but at the same time the peace symbol dies in the process, that would be a great change! You could also develop the power of tomura shigaraki more, as well as develop the heroes and villains' quirks, which have more skills
-also other quirk that the previous owners can give you could be, the ability to fly, the ability to control your inner energy (the ability to materialize your inner energy outside, you can launch energy attacks / ki!), the ability to have eternal life (this comes with eternal youth, but it does not make you immortal, if they kill you you can die!), the ability to share a skill with others by joining them (you could share eternal life with your girls if you have a harem !), etc., we would have a super strong MC, but if you really exploit the quirk of the other heroes and villains, then you would balance the power scale.
-The MC after graduation could be a hero like saitama, who does not care for fame, he only does it because he likes it, is born, eliminates villains.
- Another change to history could be that when the peace symbol died, the era of the villains returned, great villains began to form grou**, and began to attack, destroying cities, etc., the age of terror returned, tomura with their broken power, could go to rescue his teacher, this once released, begins to cause more destruction, and find a quirk that gives him a regeneration like that of ´´majin buu´´, and becomes someone almost impossible to kill, only the MC can kill him View More
My Hero Academia: A Hero's Will · C0
2 weeks ago
-It was fine in my opinion, ´´all might´´ can pass the ´´one for all´´ to the MC, this would not enhance his quirk I think, it would only make when he hits with his haki, that blow is 100 times more powerful, but likewise, the MC would have to master it, and it would also give him the skills of the previous users, a great change could be, that when ´´all might´´ faces against ´´all for one´´, he dies defeating him, defeat to the final villain, but at the same time the peace symbol dies in the process, that would be a great change! You could also develop the power of tomura shigaraki more, as well as develop the heroes and villains' quirks, which have more skills
-also other quirk that the previous owners can give you could be, the ability to fly, the ability to control your inner energy (the ability to materialize your inner energy outside, you can launch energy attacks / ki!), the ability to have eternal life (this comes with eternal youth, but it does not make you immortal, if they kill you you can die!), the ability to share a skill with others by joining them (you could share eternal life with your girls if you have a harem !), etc., we would have a super strong MC, but if you really exploit the quirk of the other heroes and villains, then you would balance the power scale.
-The MC after graduation could be a hero like saitama, who does not care for fame, he only does it because he likes it, is born, eliminates villains.
- Another change to history could be that when the peace symbol died, the era of the villains returned, great villains began to form grou**, and began to attack, destroying cities, etc., the age of terror returned, tomura with their broken power, could go to rescue his teacher, this once released, begins to cause more destruction, and find a quirk that gives him a regeneration like that of ´´majin buu´´, and becomes someone almost impossible to kill, only the MC can kill him View More
My Hero Academia: A Hero's Will · C0
2 weeks ago
he has not had feelings for ´´hela´´ even if hundreds of years have passed, because he has seen her as his sister, not as a possible girlfriend, but if he saw her differently, he is sure to develop feelings for her, also in the Today, there are cases where women do not mind sharing a man, do not tell me that you have not seen any ?, because there are many of them, also there are countries where polygamy exists, and women happily share the man, also if you do not like ´´hela´´ for being yandere, dominate it and have it submissive with the dragon rod!, do not tell me that your MC does not have the ****** to do it? View More

GenericName_3000: Okay, one, I'm sorry if real-life problems hurt your feelings. Sometimes people have feelings for people who don't return those feelings. That's life. You shouldn't get with someone you don't have feelings for, just because they have feelings for you and you feel some weird obligation to accept those feelings. That's a recipe for disaster.

Two, Loki has know Hela for hundreds of years; if feelings haven't developed already, they're not going to magically appear just because he gets in a relationship with her, are they?

Three, sure, every man would love to have a Harem, but in a realistic setting, would any of those women agree to share the man they love? Best case scenario? No, they wouldn't and he'd to pick one of the women. Worst case scenario? They'd all break up with the man because he's a two-timing scumbag. It doesn't matter what the guy wants. It's literally all up to the women in a scenario like this.

And it doesn't matter that he's a God, either. Which he isn't, really. He's just a powerful Alien. That's all. A woman like Susan Storm wouldn't care if he was a God; she'd still dump his ass if he had sex with a woman other than herself.

Relationships that last and are secure/steady, are usually built on mutual romantic feelings. One-sided relationships usually fail.

If I was in his place I would deny Hela and not get with her - she's a goddamn Yandere! She's obsessive and would no doubt kill any woman who tries to get with him, or any woman he sleeps with. You're goddamn crazy if you think getting with Hela and having a harem are things Loki can do at the same time.

Whatever, you're allowed your opinions and whatnot. Thanks for reading.

Marvel: Loki · C3
2 weeks ago
if you put indications that ´´hela´´ is in love with loki, and you do not make them even, the only thing that you will get is that the readers bother, also, ´´hela´´ can be your lover, loki can have multiple women, Come on, who would not wish to have several women as wives, even if he does not make love, just as he would have as his wife, at present, most couples do not give each other for love, but for convenience, true love has already died, they marry because they agree or like the person's character or physicality, but once you lose that, they change partners, the fantasy of every modern man is to be surrounded by beauties and have them as his wife. Sincerely, Loki does not make ´´hela´´ his wife, because he has no feelings for her, while she does, it is ********************, since the Feelings can develop over time, besides it is a god! Do not tell me that if you were in your place, you would not want to have all the women that seemed beautiful to you? If you did not want it, it would be hypocritical in my opinion, already That you would be denying yourself a wish. View More
Marvel: Loki · C3
2 weeks ago
when I said about a couple ?, the dragon with its incredible magic can take human form, conserving all its equal strength, it would be a more difficult target. also if the author wants to put it as a couple, nobody forces him. I say it, because logically, he is going to be interested in the customs of his teacher, where he lives, that makes these people so interesting, he thinks, has been locked up or hidden for more than 100,000 years, now that he evolved into an oriental dragon I develop more intelligence, would not be curious ?.
-also with its incredible amount of magical power and ability to control it after evolving dragon, it could be enchanted and made small, and is wrapped around the neck of the MC like a scarf to always protect its teacher, it would not be great to have a MC that Do you have a dragon like a scarf ?! View More

lsoma: nahhhh can agree with most but the changing into human is so overused its stupid. In every novel ive read (trust its a lot) practically all of them where an mc is a monster or has a pet they ALWAYS change back to or into human... if author goes with that then he should just keep the dragon as its meant to be... a dragon. Plus if your looking for a love interest then can always use a famous person from our world. Maybe someone like taylor swift, an actor, model or something. or he could even mix it with another series like marvel. would make the novel way more interesting. ofc bc its still quite early and hes buying all these shares he can make his own company or just be known as being rich af

with the absorbing thing ngl I dont mind if he absorbs the snake and it increases his stats but kinda want him to absorb fawkins ? (the phenoix) or some other creature. I mean again most hp novel always go the make the body into a snake, would be nice to see a different route.

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C63
2 weeks ago
Well, he goes to India, it would be great to start using magic without a wand, the ritual he finds is an extremely old one that makes the body and magic stronger to an extreme degree, and gives him the tongue of parsley (parsel), It also gives you the ability of the basilisk to have a long life and that its magic continues to grow without stopping, the requirement for this, is that you use a basilisk of several hundred years, which are extremely rare, the MC uses the basilisk of the chamber of secrets and strengthens its magic core and body to an extreme degree, plus a long life and a magic with unlimited growth, the MC would become ´´OP´´
- If this ritual exists, why are there no powerful magicians? Because they were hunted by those of their kind because they said they were evil, and none survived, now this was forgotten by the world, only the magical families of hundreds of years old hidden from the world, they have some clue about this, like: the ears of the one who performed the ritual are pointed, their pupils are like those of a rectil, they have the tongue ´´parsel´´, an extremely strong body, a force capable of Destroy a wall of 5 meters of express of a blow, and a magic that seems to have no growth limit.
- but later finds in a place far from the world in one of his adventures, at the bottom of a cave, a super huge basilisk, thousands of years old (100 000+ years), this basilisk was never found someone who I know the parsel language, since I always lived in a group of huge caves miles underground, how did this MC find this basilisk then? One of his snakes, fell through a crack while exploring the world, collecting information, when it fell , fell kilometers underground, but managed to withstand the blow, he found himself in a dark place, but with his sight he managed to see without problems, exploring and looking for a way out, he found the huge basilisk (have you seen the movie "Dragon Wars"? , the basilisk would be the size and length of that snake that comes out, super huge, capable of wrapping a huge building !!), it flees through the hairs before being noticed, in its escape, it fell into another crack, ending in the sea., the snake returned to the MC to report what he found, the MC read his mind and was surprised by what he saw, and was immediately interested and an incredible ambition was born !. the MC went to look for the place, end, enter, explore and found the basilisk, I dominate it with the parsel language, now I had a super old and huge basilisk with more than 100,000+ years that was under his command and he was loyal !, then the MC leaves the cave with his new pet.
- The MC begins to hunt the wicked wizards, and they feed them to their huge basilisk!, since I read in some ancient text, that if you feed magicians to a basilisk they could mutate and be more powerful and among more wizards eat better !, your basilisk after eating so many wizards, mutates, and becomes a dragon !, (the same dragon of ´´dragon wars´´ that came out at the end of the movie), now the Mc has a dragon that fly super loyal to him !, the dragon is female, and with his incredible magical power, he can take human form, also the MC with an ancient spell links his life to his dragon, making now the life of the MC is as long as the of the dragon !, even if the MC dies, the dragon too or vice versa, but who could kill the most powerful magical creature that ever existed?
-the basilisk now dragon and the MC, are immune to magic!, causing that no magician can kill them with some existing spell, but their ultra hard skin, resistance, and speed of recovery, they could only die for about 10 nuclear bombs exploded to the time!.
- Author, this idea is great, if you do not know how to continue or which way to give the novel, you can take this idea and do an MC OP with a dragon !. View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C63
3 weeks ago
if there is harem, it is not necessary to pick up women everywhere, you can pick only the most beautiful women in the world, for example, if there are 3 women who are the most beautiful on the planet, each of one of the three powers, those three would be his women in the future, he would only choose the best of the best, those girls would join him for a simple reason, his ambition to continue leveling up or be more powerful, but these cannot because they have already reached the limit of his race, and the frusta, but they find the MC (and you as the author give a genius context of how they are and how they discover that he can do something as mystical as changing your race completely), his desire to be better, is so great that they don't mind being their women, and later they fall in love with him.
the girls are virgins, View More

Redsunworld: I appreciate very much that you like my novel, as far as Harem is concerned, I don't think to go in that direction, I have never liked it when the MCs generate relationships with any woman just for being beautiful, as for the relationship between the Primordialis core and Genus core I will explain it in more detail in the future

Abyssal Lord of the Magi World · C12
3 weeks ago
the multiverse is made up of an original universe, and the rest are parallel universes, within that universe, there are many planes, which are huge, are like dimensions, in the universe there are several dimensions, the abyss could be in one of them, the multiverse is a cube that floats in the void that is the onmiverse, you leave your cube and go to another cube that is another multiverse, which could be one piece, bleach, dragon ball, etc.
I think that is better understood, don't you think? View More

Redsunworld: There are planes like the abyss that are so giant that they can be considered a universe by themselves. That's why it is considered a multiverse

Abyssal Lord of the Magi World · C8
3 weeks ago
the cover image will be its final form ?, because it does not look great, it would be great if its appearance is like meliodas ***** demon king plus its horns on the head, and you give the skills of the commandments to the MC, the aura of the abyss MC could control it to such an extent that he could handle it like the dark matter handled by the demons of ´´nanatsu not taiza´´, the MC there would be super broken with those abilities and the ability to manage the aura of the abyss to such an extent!

- (https://qph.fs.quoracdn.net/main-qimg-f1419f770434f74cc46203b2119edb16) This would be the appearance of the MC, you add the two horns on his head, you take away more black marks from his body, you take away that flower of dark matter on his back, you take away those golden arms and transform them into a golden ring that is behind his head, from this thousands of hands can come out of the same material to attack, defend himself, the ring would be like the ring that dainshinkan has ´´dragon ball´´, only a little bigger, this ring would be a materialized form of the aura of the abyss, which indicates that it can dematerialize it and make it return to its body, although it is not necessary that the parts be golden, They may be black, but gold is great.
- What do you think of this incredible author idea ?, Since if the MC later will have a monstrous appearance, readers would not like it, you'd better see the MC become a monster at the beginning, the appearance would be great, the skills too, and you would have to an MC OP. View More
Abyssal Lord of the Magi World · C12
3 weeks ago
So far the story is great, a cunning MC, intelligent, ruthless, calculating, will there be harem? He doesn't need much romantic interaction if there is harem, since if he transforms his girls into Neo-demons, they will unconsciously have the need to serve him, it is perfect!. View More
Abyssal Lord of the Magi World · C12
3 weeks ago
What the MC should say is that he wants to be the strongest in his Multiverse, and because he tells EZ about the universe? If he doesn't even know what that is, you better change the word universe for world View More
Abyssal Lord of the Magi World · C8
3 weeks ago
Ah, ****! I don't understand why the authors like their MCs to be good paralyzed garbage that never achieved anything in life, and then Boom! They are reborn with a trick, they really believe that someone like that would be given that gift if it were right ?, no !, that would only be aimed at great figures who did something great in life, or added many points with all their previous lives. With that kind of boring MC, practically one already knows what the story will be like.
- I look forward to the revolution where MCs are people who achieved something great in their lives, that would be interesting, because their type of thinking would be different, and we would not have the typical losing beta MC. but I think it will never happen, since I think the MCs do it that way, because the readers are equally unsuccessful that the MCs and that's why they like to read that kind of stories, or the authors could never have the same kind of thinking that someone who achieved something big in life, and that is why it is impossible for them to do an MC like that, yes, the safest thing is the last thing, because if you are not someone big in life, and you experienced the same thing, you can never think like they. View More
Evolution God · C1
3 weeks ago
If health plus the mana is the power of battle, then, health would be like defense and resistance, and the mana would be the power of attack ?, it is confusing, it would have been better the sum of the statistics attack, defense, speed, resistance. View More
Evolution God · C0
3 weeks ago
but anyway, they are demons, not humans, they are supposed to have a different nature, unless these are very sentimental demons, and the only thing that differentiates them from humans is that they have horns and absorb qi View More

Flip: I accidentally exaggerated the instincts they had. What I mean to say is devils like killing and f**cking because they get qi from doing it, they’re not born that way. I deleted the parts that were misleading.

Devil Cultivator · C0
3 weeks ago
The MC looks like a masochist, maybe he likes to make things difficult for him? View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C15
3 weeks ago
I imagine that he will have a technique that returns to a state of purity for a woman, since since he doesn't care that someone else would enjoy one of which would be his wife in the future, he surely has a technique that erases impurities, contamination and memories, pretending to have never been with another person, because otherwise, it is as if the MC liked the NTR.
-even, so far it seems a boring MC, the story became a bit boring, since one expected the MC to kill the emperor and with an attack destroy all the annoying bugs, what better birthday !, and turns the stepmother into your toy !, I will see how it progresses, although I will only continue reading it by the R-18 scenes and not by history View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C13
3 weeks ago
moving behind the scenes is boring, it must be a prince who takes the women he wants, kills the annoying bugs, that is debauchery! Be dominant, take what you want and destroy those who bother you! Do not hide! View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C12
3 weeks ago
cliche View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C6
3 weeks ago
if the MC were strong at this time, it could have killed the emperor, having faces put everyone to see the death of the emperor and the strength of the prince View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C6
3 weeks ago
bored, it seems that the author does not take into account that the MC is a demon, and his instincts are to kill and ****, he said so, so in the MC he should not feel hate for how he died, since his instincts prevent him from doing so, He should only feel self-loathing for being a demonic demon and not having enough power to kill the visconte and turn his concubines into his toy, reversing the papers, come on uncle! He is a demon, not a human who is more sentimental !, so far it seems that the MC is a human and not a demon, I recommend to the author that if he is going to continue with the very patented personality of the MC, he will change his race to human and all the context of the world of demons will change him to human . why his demonic nature does not match the human personality he has View More
Devil Cultivator · C0
3 weeks ago
Ah, bored, with this stupid MC personality, I'm sure I'll get bored with this novel, he better abandoned it View More
Another world lls · C5
3 weeks ago
What nonsense questions, could you make the LLS multiverse a CUBE, and the dragon ball multiverse is another CUBE, those cubes have levels, the LLS cube is low, the dragon ball cube is NIvel high, when it is enough to leave its cube er to the dragon ball cube; his power will be changed to the power of dragon ball, following the laws, when that ends, his total power will be equal to the red Saiyan God. View More
Another world lls · C4
3 weeks ago
a better wish would have been,
have unparalleled charisma and charm, plus the aura of a leader, and that can turn any of his hired beasts into guardians.
- With the charisma and charm, his leader aura, none of his beasts will betray him. View More
Another world lls · C3
3 weeks ago
The reason why he does not choose dragon ball is stupid in my opinion, when you get to that world, you look for the dragon balls and ask him the desire to trust you, unlimited bravery! The most logical reason was the danger he represents. Zeno-sama´´ since if you don't like it, you could eliminate it, the world of dragon ball is the best option to reincarnate for anyone, you just have to find the spheres and make your wish, the only worrying thing is ´´Zeno-sama´´ ´, although that can be solved with some desires, become super strong and create a technique that resists the elimination of ´´zeno-sama´´, or simply become stronger than him, even if it takes thousands of years. View More
Another world lls · C2
3 weeks ago
that does not join the will of hell, it would be boring, since it would be tied, the idea of ​​becoming a hybrid and having a body of flesh would be great, would have a new species, and could be the progenitor of this. View More
Re:Devil · C7
3 weeks ago
or it would be the new species called ´diablo´´, something forbidden that never had to exist, would make sense with the name of the novel View More
Re:Devil · C7
3 weeks ago
Name it ´´IM´´, and when you become someone very strong, be called ´´IM-SAMA´´ (as one piece), or ´´Zeno´´ and then it would be called ´´Zeno-sama´ ´ (King of everything), what is his third evolution ?, a devil of the shadows, or of the darkness ?, you plan to make him have the ability of the shadows of the MC of 'solo leveling', it would be great if when eat enough humans and angels, become a perfect hybrid, its sealed ability, it could be the ability to fuse, or devour, so it would have a body made of flesh and would no longer be made of essence. the MC would be the new spice called fallen angel ?, or already there are fallen angels ?, the angel part would give him the power of creation, his devil part would give him the power of destruction, and his human part would balance all three and give A potential of infinite evolution. View More
Re:Devil · C7
3 weeks ago
Name it ´´IM´´, and when you become someone very strong, be called ´´IM-SAMA´´ (as one piece), or ´´Zeno´´ and then it would be called ´´Zeno-sama´ ´ (King of everything), what is his third evolution ?, a devil of the shadows, or of the darkness ?, you plan to make him have the ability of the shadows of the MC of 'solo leveling', it would be great if when eat enough humans and angels, become a perfect hybrid, its sealed ability, it could be the ability to fuse, or devour, so it would have a body made of flesh and would no longer be made of essence. the MC would be the new spice called fallen angel ?, or already there are fallen angels ?, the angel part would give him the power of creation, his devil part would give him the power of destruction, and his human part would balance all three and give A potential of infinite evolution. View More
Re:Devil · C0
3 weeks ago
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