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when a new dungeon floor is created, it will be created down or up?, it would look better upwards, like a tower, it could also be that, in order not to kill women, I could make a contract with them, and maybe if when one captures all the dungeons that exist on his home planet, he could merge them all, forming a great celestial tower, which would be larger than the planet, and then, the entire planet is absorbed, and only one huge tower remains in the system solar!. View More
The Lustful Dungeon Master · C24
3 weeks ago
white hair looks better, if you saw the appearance that results from the fusion of two gods in the mahua de douluo dalu 2.5, surely you would agree that with white everything looks better, and that white at the same time represents all colors View More
The Lustful Dungeon Master · C9
3 weeks ago
Although Erza is very strong, being able to destroy a meteorite, it has no destructive attacks capable of destroying a city, country, etc., in a single shot, I would see Ikaros in Pandora mode of Sora no Otoshimono, having as two phases, an active mode, where it is to fight, destroy and is cold, cruel, etc, and the passive mode, where it is to do other things, also fight, but on a much smaller scale, and is friendly, warm, etc. He has great destructive power, since when he enters the dungueon, many monsters will attack him, and he needs massive destruction skills, and if he wants sword skills, he can be taught. View More
The Lustful Dungeon Master · C5
3 weeks ago
the angel Gabriel of dxd would have been better, but as surely he could create other races, surely later he would create gabriel View More
The Lustful Dungeon Master · C3
3 weeks ago
it seems that you did not understand my idea, even if they are clones, it is actually the same, for example, the MC creates 1000 clones and its consciousness or mind is divided into 1000, it is as if it had 1000 eyes, I do not know if it was better understood View More

Omnislayer: I disagree with your idea about using clones to satisfying his woman.
That's sucks, what is the difference of NTR with that?
I'm not the author but I suggest the author to not go that way just to satisfy his woman or else you'll lose some readers cuz I know they care about that.

And about lesbian? I've read one Novel about Harem King and it doesn't have lesbian cuz the harem only satisfy their king not vice versa.

A world of fantasy and inverse beauty · C11
1 month ago
I believe that his spirit should not be intelligent, since that never happens in the novel, nor in the Chinese manhua. View More
Douluo Dalu : White God · C10
1 month ago
Killing would look like bad, it would be best to make them piss in their scary pants, more shame is that, and incidentally his sister hates NEi li, causing him to lose his motivation, since in the novel he understands I think, that if she does not have her love, she will not have much motivation, and the head of alchemy becomes cold towards Nei li.
- also, as a requirement of the book of time, is that its owner has a strong spirit, unwavering will, and in the time that Nei li has his emotionally (will) reverses for earning the hate of his love (since he worships in secret to his brother), the book sees that he became unworthy of having it, and disappears from Nei li, along with the seed he had, leaving Nei li alone with his memories, and his cultivation technique, already without frame weave (since the plot armor would be his book). The MC later finds the book.
a good development, and not meaningless killer just for an insult. View More
Long Live Ye Clan Second Young Master · C27
1 month ago
as they do not put in how long it lasts, it seems that the MC is precocious View More
Spirit Cultivation · C49
1 month ago
there are people who mentally destabilize when they kill or see someone die in front of their eyes, but there are others where killing is as easy as breathing, the MC has to kill as easy as breathing, of course, once you have information if you have any power behind him who can cause them problems, and if they do, he lets him live, but when no one sees him, he kills him, and makes it appear that his death was natural.
- Since in a world where personal power is the law, the one with the biggest fist wins, you don't have to leave nails loose, since you don't want to die for a stupid thing that is to leave a potential enemy alive, and what else late that is your loss. That is the mentality one has in a world where strength wins, and not political, economic power, etc. (I don't know if you understood me). being thus, that many MC of several novels already saw dead by their enemies that are much stronger than them, but these MC are protected by an armor of the plot, and a nerf to the intelligence of these enemies, that if it were real, It would be quite the opposite. View More
Spirit Cultivation · C45
1 month ago
you should put the ranks of the beasts and their pairs of spirit cultivators, if a beast rank 4 is equal to a spiritual lord, etc., and also put that increase in power gives the level of each artifact (30%, 40%, etc.) , so as not to confuse the readers, with an edition of previous chapters it would be fixed. View More
Spirit Cultivation · C43
1 month ago
the names of the kingdoms must mean something, for example, someone who is in the realm of the great spiritual master, must have complete mastery of their energy, and have mastered a lot of techniques, that would be a requirement, unless those names have the first cultivators put them on because it sounded great, and in the kingdom of heaven they have other names, and in reality they all turn out to be 10 stages of a single kingdom? View More
Spirit Cultivation · C39
1 month ago
there is no stage 1-9 or low, medium, high, peak ?, it seems that the author did not put much effort into the creation and explanation of the kingdoms.
I also imagine that the inhabitants of the kingdom of heaven are not really gods, and they are only inhabitants of a higher plane, and for these inhabitants, all the kingdoms that exist in this lower plane, are actually like a refinement, of ten stages, since these kingdoms do not have ranks, and it is only said that while breaking more barriers, it will advance, it is a very low explanation. View More
Spirit Cultivation · C0
1 month ago
the MC was thirteen years old when he was told that in ten years they would destroy the nobility, so when he turns 23, the action would just begin, and the MC is still 16 years old, which gives about 7 years of time, unless what I spend in previous chapters, weak and take away 7 years of life to the old king. View More
World Domination System · C68
1 month ago
if those mosquitoes can find ether, the natural ether chamber that he hid should no longer be dry? View More
World Domination System · C58
1 month ago
If the father was marked and could not do anything, then seeing that it is a burden (food, etc.), the logical thing is to go outside the kingdom, hide his mark, and start earning money in other kingdoms, either as a mercenary , thief, etc, and leave his wife and son in the care of a friend, and when he has achieved something elsewhere, he takes his family, problem solved, do not tell me he could not do that ?, unless the brand seals its powers, and incidentally think with the muscles, and do not have the ability to become a merchant !. View More
World Domination System · C21
1 month ago
If the father was marked and could not do anything, then seeing that it is a burden (food, etc.), the logical thing is to go outside the kingdom, hide his mark, and start earning money in other kingdoms, either as a mercenary , thief, etc, and leave his wife and son in the care of a friend, and when he has achieved something elsewhere, he takes his family, problem solved, do not tell me he could not do that ?, unless the brand seals its powers, and incidentally think with the muscles, and do not have the ability to become a merchant !. View More
World Domination System · C21
1 month ago
- Later they discover kingdoms that follow the Hero, and it was not known that these existed, because no one has entered there?
- When you become king, and improve technology with magic, you can create magical technology that can terraform planets.
- Will the system make him the king of the planet, and then the emperor of his solar system? View More
World Domination System · C5
1 month ago
Oh, although King sounds good, Emperor sounds better! View More
World Domination System · C4
1 month ago

darkoneko: ..."Neural Aptitude: F". Does it mean he could actrually raise it throught the System and become a pilot ?

The Mech Touch · C5
1 month ago
very confusing, it could have been explained better, I think it needs to be edited View More
Inevitable Road To Divinity · C3
1 month ago
if he wanted to rest, he could have rested while being inside his mother, making a great sexual scene.
- a great scene would be to find a cat woman, or woman of the rabbit breed, and buy a large coat that makes him look fat ?, and inside that coat, is the girl, making the MC always have got his cock inside the girl, while walking, etc, and girl is always sucking the chest of the MC while he fucks her, it's a great scene! View More
The Perverted Evil Cultivator · C26
1 month ago
As your novel has the word incubo in its name, it is logical to think that it was mostly about having sex, and that the MC among more girls gets ****ed, and cultivate with them twice, the faster their cultivation speed will be, and will increase This also by logic, so make several chapters without having a sex scene, I would not fit I think.
- Unless what happens in one day, you will write it in several chapters. View More
Cultivation Technique Incubus Primordial. · C9
1 month ago
the cliché is not going to come that just when they are going to kill their girls, the MC comes running with a burst of anger and eliminates them all. The MC should already know the cliche responses that will be given as a result of their actions, girlfriends, etc.
- something that is not cliche and would give a better point ?, is that when the ancestor with the divine artifact is going to attack, the infernal forces also arrive, or run into them, and a battle begins, their women realize, and they escape, and they go towards the entrance of the tower at a great speed, where they will wait for the MC, the MC when he leaves hears that they wanted to kill them, and puts them inside the bag, and goes to kill the enemies, now as his consort has it hidden in his bag and the enemies do not know the relationship between the two, there will be no problems for the MC with the enemy who fell in love with his consort, and will only come to the explanation that he fled or disappeared, and will go to looking for her, for the world, giving the MC time, to grow stronger, she can also abvert her mother, that if something happens to some of her women, she will eliminate the infernal cult of existence, and she will turn it into her deposit of semen, and breaks with the help of the system the contract you have with s u father !. View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C246
1 month ago
the cliché is not going to come that just when they are going to kill their girls, the MC comes running with a burst of anger and eliminates them all. The MC should already know the cliche responses that will be given as a result of their actions, girlfriends, etc.
- something that is not cliche and would give a better point ?, is that when the ancestor with the divine artifact is going to attack, the infernal forces also arrive, or run into them, and a battle begins, their women realize, and they escape, and they go towards the entrance of the tower at a great speed, where they will wait for the MC, the MC when he leaves hears that they wanted to kill them, and puts them inside the bag, and goes to kill the enemies, now as his consort has it hidden in his bag and the enemies do not know the relationship between the two, there will be no problems for the MC with the enemy who fell in love with his consort, and will only come to the explanation that he fled or disappeared, and will go to looking for her, for the world, giving the MC time, to grow stronger, she can also abvert her mother, that if something happens to some of her women, she will eliminate the infernal cult of existence, and she will turn it into her deposit of semen, and breaks with the help of the system the contract you have with s u father !. View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C246
1 month ago
the cliché is not going to come that just when they are going to kill their girls, the MC comes running with a burst of anger and eliminates them all. The MC should already know the cliche responses that will be given as a result of their actions, girlfriends, etc.
- something that is not cliche and would give a better point ?, is that when the ancestor with the divine artifact is going to attack, the infernal forces also arrive, or run into them, and a battle begins, their women realize, and they escape, and they go towards the entrance of the tower at a great speed, where they will wait for the MC, the MC when he leaves hears that they wanted to kill them, and puts them inside the bag, and goes to kill the enemies, now as his consort has it hidden in his bag and the enemies do not know the relationship between the two, there will be no problems for the MC with the enemy who fell in love with his consort, and will only come to the explanation that he fled or disappeared, and will go to looking for her, for the world, giving the MC time, to grow stronger, she can also abvert her mother, that if something happens to some of her women, she will eliminate the infernal cult of existence, and she will turn it into her deposit of semen, and breaks with the help of the system the contract you have with s u father !. View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C246
1 month ago
The kingdom will be of magic ?, because if it is, there could be two professions, the knight, who cultivates the KI, and the magicians, who cultivate Mana.
- the kingdoms could be an apprentice knight, rookie knight, etc.
- There would be several races, the incubo race is extinct in the mortal planes, its technique came from the higher realms, and since it is essential, it allows you to cultivate the ki and mana.
- and if it's normal, then you can go with the same traditional cultivation realm View More
Cultivation Technique Incubus Primordial. · C8
1 month ago
the part of losing something, is very vague and meh, it was best to say when he woke up, it was that he had an epiphany, inspiration, and began to draw so that he did not forget what he saw, so if he asks why he began to draw It was because of an epiphany, inspiration, etc., not that because he is going to lose something, since it makes no sense to others, making them think that he is lying. View More
Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C18
1 month ago
the part of losing something, is very vague and meh, it was best to say when he woke up, it was that he had an epiphany, inspiration, and began to draw so that he did not forget what he saw, so if he asks why he began to draw It was because of an epiphany, inspiration, etc., not that because he is going to lose something, since it makes no sense to others, making them think that he is lying. View More
Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C18
1 month ago
author !!, I leave you a great idea! 1.

- Let us say that the world where I transmigrate the "MC" is one of many mortal worlds controlled by gods.
- Then the world that transmigrated the ´´MC´´, Beauty was invested by the fault of a god!
- Let's say that this unknown god, with a divine position, would reverse the sense of beauty of an enemy god of his, thus creating a great problem for that god, because he would begin to insult the goddesses, etc., but this enemy god realized time and I start a fight, in the middle of that fight, the position was lost and fell into a vacuum, and when the position hit a barrier of a mortal plane, the vessel broke and the whole position spread through the mortal plane, changing the sense of beauty, and as the 'MC' came later, the position did not affect him.
- Only 300 years have passed since such an event happened, the divine position was of slow effect (but for a god the sense of time does not matter), so the ´´1 and 2´´ generation of humans was still fine, but the The third all changed. then all the beautiful women were imprisoned, as the other races have a much longer life than humans, those beauties are still alive!
- Then the ´´MC´´ with the help of this ´´system´´, could quickly gain power, money, and collect all the beauties of the world imprisoned !, the ´´MC´´ builds its mega mansion, or The "system" gives you as a gift, the option to choose something from the store regardless of the cost, the "MC" would find an artifact that is linked to his soul, and is like a universe in size inside, where he can put anything inside, then there is puts all his women! In addition the artifact has the ability, that for every woman inside, he gains more strength, speed, etc., it is as if all the attributes of his women, pets, etc, force, speed, resistance, will be added to the "MC". It would be like a super broken harem artifact!
- How would you satisfy all your women? Find a technique in the system where you can make as many clones as many women have, such as naruto, but better, and also this technique allows you to divide your mind the same as the number of clones So, in conclusion, it doesn't matter how many clones the ´´MC´´ does, everyone will be the one, because their mind is divided, it is not self ´´NTR´´ or ´´netori´´. since it's the same (I don't know if it explains well to me)
- The ´´MC´´ would then have a constant source of income of beauties to his harem! for the position situation. and at every moment his power would increase!
-The ´´MC´´ can use his friend to get money, see everyone as pawns, except his women
- The "MC" becomes a cultivator and becomes a god! When he becomes a god, he will have eternal life and all his women too, but he can also get a system technique that will light the life of all his women to his, with this, none of his women will die of old age if the ´´MC´´ does not die, they will practically have eternal life as long as the ´´MC´´ does not die, or also that this ability comes from the harem artifact! .

What do you think of this idea author? View More
A world of fantasy and inverse beauty · C11
1 month ago
autor!!, te dejo una idea genial!1.

- digamos que el mundo donde transmigro el ´´MC´´, es uno de muchos mundos mortales controlados por dioses.
- entonces el mundo que transmigro el ´´MC´´, la Belleza se invirtio por la culpa de un dios!
- digamos que este dios desconocido, con una posion divina, invertiria el sentido de belleza de un dios enemigo suyo, creando asi un gran problema a ese dios, porque empezaria a insultar a las diosas, etc, pero este dios enemigo se dio cuenta a tiempo y comenso una pelea, en medio de esa pelea, la posion se perdio y cayo al vacio, y cuando la posion golpeo una barrera de un plano mortal, el recipiente se rompio y toda la posion se esparcio por el plano mortal, cambiando el sentido de belleza, y como el ´´MC´´ llego despues, no le afecto la posion.
- solo pasaron 300 años desde que sucedio tal evento, la posion divina fue de efecto lento (pero para un dios el sentido del tiempo no importa), asi que la ´´1 y 2´´ generacion de humanos todavia estaba bien, pero el la tercera todo cambio. entonces todas las mujeres hermosas fueron encarceladas, como la otras razas tienen una vida mucho mas larga que los humanos, todavia estan vivas esas bellezas!.
- entonces el ´´MC´´ con la ayuda de este ´´sistema´´´, podria ganar poder rapidamente, dinero, y recolectar a todas las bellezas del mundo encarceladas!, el ´´MC´´ construye su mega mansion, o el ´´sistema´´ le da como regalo, la opción de escoger algo de la tienda sin importar el costo, el ´´MC´´ encontraria un artefacto que se liga con su alma, y es como un universo en tamaño el interior, donde puede poner culquier cosa dentro, entonces hay pone a todas sus mujeres!, ademas el artefacto tiene la habilidad, de que por cada mujer dentro, gana mas fuerza, velocidad, etc, es como si todos los atributos de sus mujeres, mascotas, etc, fuerza, velocidad, resistencia, se sumaran al ´´MC´´. seria como un artefacto harem super roto!
- como satisfaceria a todas sus mujeres?, encuentra una tecnica en el ´´sistema´´donde puede hacer tantos clones como tantas mujeres tenga, como naruto, pero mejor, y ademas esta tecnica le permite dividir igual su mente que la cantidad de clones, entonces en conclusion, no importa cuantos clones haga el ´´MC´´, todos seran el, porque su mente esta divida, no es auto ´´NTR´´ o ´´netori´´. ya que es el mismo.(no se si me explique bien)
- el ´´MC´´ luego tendria una constante fuente de ingresos de bellezas a su harem! por la situacion de la posion. y a cada momento su poder aumentaria!.
-el ´´MC´´ puede usar a su amigo para conseguir dinero, ve a todos como peones, menos a sus mujeres.
- el ´´MC´´ se convierte en cultivador y se convierte en un dios!, cuando se convierte en un dios, tendra vida eterna y todas sus mujeres tambien, pero tambien puede conseguir una tecnica del sistema que lige la vida de todas sus mujeres a la de el, con esto, ninguna de sus mujeres morira de vejes si el ´´MC´´ no muere, practicamente tendran vida eterna mientras el ´´MC´´ no muera, o tambien que esa habilidad venga del artefacto harem!.

que piensa de esta idea autor!!? View More
A world of fantasy and inverse beauty · C11
1 month ago
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