@ToxicShazam I want to reply directly to your coment, but I cant seem to find it.
Anyway, he seems like that because this is honestly the first protagonist I’ve ever written. I didn’t want to make him seem emotionless, but at the same time I wanted him to feel like he has a breath if experience to call on.
I honestly think I just need to strike a better balance in characterization, which I’m finding is my weakness in writing. But I’ll try to improve on it.
Thanks for the coment.
Cortana