Blackwater

11mth

Commented

it's teen spirit, it smells like teen spirit

"What do we have here? Is it the YOUTH that I smell?"

Blackwater

11mth

Posted

it's starts pretty good overall the first few chapters are pretty upbeat, and the development is nicely paced and gives time for the characters to develop a bit. Sadly, after the time skip, it goes just downhill. The character changes from a calm and collected character to a cold shifty one. It kinda takes all the fun out of the story and doesn't make much sense to me as even the plot gets darker with little to no world building in that direction. The story overall is not bad, but I didn't enjoy it in the later half.

Blackwater

11mth

Commented

I don't know, truthfully Sansa is basirhe Ginny Weasly of GOT in the worst way. Fingerling for her Hero, delusional until you break her out of it and more Tully than Stark. There are better options

3)Sansa Stark(Maybe)

In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

Blackwater

11mth

Commented

that's not stealing, that is Looting, and if you beat a trashmob, it's only polite to also loot them

He found a wallet and took out all of the money inside it. "This is a nice wallet you have here, it's mine now." Ichigo grinned and put his new stolen wallet into his pocket.

Blackwater

11mth

Commented

hmm, if it's like that, wouldn't there be some people running around with a Divine Grade plug up the Bumm ? You know for that sweet internal and external power absorption

A weapon's strength was directly linked to the speed at which it absorbed spirit energy. As a result, countless cultivators would spend their entire lives obtaining stronger Divine weapons.

Blacksmith: You Are Making Mjolnir For The Forging Exam?

Fantasy · Absolute World's Best Sword

Blackwater

1yr

Posted

it's OK, I guess. The DxD arc while pretty rushed was fine overall, the story kinda lost me somewhere in the middle of the Tensura Arc, I just didn't enjoy how the world building was handled, the Dimensions mumbo jumbo, and the Time spans that were used. At some point, there was less fun stuff for me and more meh plot points on a list with more Higher Dimensions Bs mixed into it. That doesn't mean it was bad or anything, but I personally enjoyed it far less.

Next is Momo Hanakai, she is a bishop so her magic talent is above the average. 'Shall I raise her to become someone like Maple?' Xander give it a thought and kicked the thought out of his head, he immediately started training her, his goal for her is to make her the strongest barrier mage. Strong enough to at least shield against a Maou.

Instant Death [DxD]

Anime & Comics · Asthoglho

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

welcome to the dark side

*Unlimited Bag of Cookie - 1

Instant Death [DxD]

Anime & Comics · Asthoglho

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

Doesn't he know that he has the Nika fruit ?

It was weird. If it was extra blood and muscles that would explain the weight gain. But that might not be the case either, unless of course, his body was in some way connected to some weird rubber dimension.

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

Most people would assume he got shot, i mean with the pain and the sound of a Gunshot and all. Or he hot yeeted of the Mortal coil by a random Brick that drop from a Building

The next, the sound of a gunshot filled the air. After that, all he felt was a rush of pain in his back. He had dropped his gun and collapsed onto his chest.

The Modern Soul as Gregor Cleane (GOT) (ASOFAI)

Book&Literature · Game_of_thrones

Blackwater

1yr

Posted

It's pretty ok so far . Not that big of a fan how the story develops or the Charters tho. Percy feels like he is even more a playball of the Gods than the first Time around, with Nyx and Chaos messing with him whenever they want for there amusement. For someone who Traveled back in Time after fighting in multiple wars he also feels weaker than he should, mostly because the Gods / Primordial use him a entertainment of sorts. The story is not bad but i honestly expect a more free and Badass MC

Percy Jackson : Rewind Time

Book&Literature · Moonhorse

Blackwater

1yr

Posted

Writing is good, structure is also fine, pace is pretty slow but ok. I'm not that happy with the story development or the character designs because they barely differ from the Originals with the MC being a bit different and extra Drama added. So overall it's just a more Drama filled and depressing version of the Original that already wasn't a very Happy story to begin with if your read all the Volumes. With the whole NTR tag thing I'm split, i get that it's not technically NTR because the MC wasn't physical with her but in gernal most considered NTR if the love interest of an MC gets stolen in any way shape or Form and therefore the Drama and why people aren't happy. I find the whole Arc is Overdramatic just for Dramas sake.

Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward

Anime & Comics · Crownedclown

Blackwater

1yr

Posted

The first few chapters are pretty funny but later it's gets more and more disjointed and is just plain crack with no plot. And with no plot it's hard calling it a story. But overall ok for what it is

In Twilight

Movies · GingerGiant

Blackwater

1yr

Posted

Pretty good so far keep going. Kinda reminds me of an other fanfic of DxD with a similar flow, can remover much just that it had an OP MC in it and some green Robot Dog but for the love of god i can't remember the name. anyway keep going

-end 09-

Anime & Comics · Ruby_Rose_Arc

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

For those wondering who she is. Yang XIN is the chick from the Alchemy Association.

"My name is Yang Xin," Yang Xin introduced herself. Looking at Issei, she felt that he was an ordinary person, but something deep within her told her that she shouldn't underestimate him. Yang Xin's guts have never failed her. So she decided to follow it. "What's the question that you wanted to ask?".

-end 09-

Anime & Comics · Ruby_Rose_Arc

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

It is a testament to my abundance of useless knowledge and trivia that i could read a French fraise without knowing basically any French and while it's written incorrect. Tragic that in exchange i can't remember Birthdays without a notifications.

On the way home, Issei and Serafall were admiring all the pictures of Sona in a magical girl outfit. Sona, she seemed so natural in a magical girl outfit. It's such a shame that she refuses to wear it on her own. Sona has a certain Je Nais Se Quios about her.

-end 09-

Anime & Comics · Ruby_Rose_Arc

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

should the Blessing from Opis or the Unlimited Man's not give more of a boost

[Dp: 60.200/60.200] (Demonic Power)

Tensura System: The Most Powerful In DXD

Anime & Comics · DEADLYSHADOW

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

Who introduces himself like that? Hi I'm Bob, i hold the Highscore in Gitarre Hero

"My name is Noir, Ultimate class devil."

Tensura System: The Most Powerful In DXD

Anime & Comics · DEADLYSHADOW

Blackwater

1yr

Commented

True, but what a Brutally hard world to start in if you have the choice. I mean you have literally nearly completely Immune to Death kinda Gods running Amok in that world, same with Monsters all with more than one way to kill you with some BS powers, together with the Fates/ Norn's. Sounds interesting anyways. If i got the choice for a starting World it would most likely be Harry Potter, fairy Safe if you stay out of the Bloodwar stuff, Magic and Semi Modern Technology.

After contemplating for a while I decided that I wanted to go to the Percy Jackson world as I grew up really enjoying the series a lot and if I want to develop the Space an architect would be helpful and the monsters, animals, and plants could be used to raise the level of the Space relatively quickly.