Lion_stylo - Profile

I do like the story and 💯 wish for it to continue but I do think the way to go at isn't isn't necessarily right

the jumpy writing feels kind of amateurish. it feels like I'm reading through a series of drafts at a steady pace. the issue has gotten even more pronounced in recent chapter. Anyways, I like Ben 10 so I'll keep on reading even though 33 percent of the time my brain can't keep up

main use for the ship would be to provide mechs a higher assault speed and rapid deployment of key areas on the field. although it could be used for that, it wasn't it's original design

Well, the ship was specially designed to shuttle and launch Mechs. using something else would require a jurryrig solution that would probably harm the ship. I also doubt the legality of launching rocks. MTA has rules and I believe it would be considered a weapon if the ship were to use asteroids I guess it could be possible on red ocean though. it does become a multipurpose design. good idea

Honestly I'd be happy if Exlor at least decides to integrate it to one of the capital ships modules. kinda like the samurai pizza cats anime launcher.

forgot to add picture (this is an alt profile)

this story seems all over the place. one paragraph cuts to the next without any continuity or bridges. jumping from character and scene to another just like (snaps) that feels somewhat uninteresting. can't concentrate on s scene of it's 5 second pulses of each story and there are 10 at the same time

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