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George YES I HAVE BEEN Healed now you die XD Don't know why it made me laugh but it did

Everyone was immediately healed and George attacked Merlin but she evaded his attack. The fight was interesting as everyone was at their full strength.

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I left a couple of comments in the paragraphs of the first couple of chapters maybe those ideas could help you establish your novel apart from what originally inspire you hope they help you.
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This one chapter I considered is the holy grail of what the world revolves around you can say it is a key moment in the history of your world. Quin a church official who for the greater good drain an Angel to obtain its power could be considered a great evil the first time reading this chapter I thought Quin drain the Angel and went to fight the Demons and in a great flash he exploded and had his body disintegrate. but nothing is said about his spirit. oh there is so much that can be done with Quin he could be a big bad that is trying to resurrect himself or a wise mentor he could be the skill that you name google. There is so much that he can become. As this chapter stand it is almost perfect maybe a little embellishing about the events of the war you could probably introduce the names of the leaders of the angels and demons if you want to restart the war or you can leave it as is there is great mystery in this chapter and all question can be answer in the future. One question that it left open was what happen to quin after he disintegrated since there was a first holy war there must have been a second and what happen to the drain angel. You can combine this chapter with the previous and make an average length chapter as your prologue instead of having a two chapter prologue.
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Depending on how you left the end of the first chapter you can continue its development by saying that it was involve in the First Holy War or you can just start by describing the first holy war The First Holy War started when demon race and angel race went to war against each other. The human race had nothing to do with the battle but Quin, the first church official, saw the battle against both races
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Ages Past, Civilizations Fall, Great Beings Become Legends and Names Change all of this are things that happen within the great game of life; and one of those many things to have change is the name of a large and grand forest now know as the Great Founding Forest. : :.............................................. . The action that the first chapter of any novel has to do is to hook the audience there are many ways to achieve this, I just like hooking people with a mystery with this first sentence I have written people would ask themselves what other names has it had in the past. You can know : : ........................................ Now that there is a mystery you can introduce some titles in a sort of list style but without going over board. a way to do it is like so. . . ............................................. One of the first names written down is the Forest of Eternal Life, For deep within it there is believe to be a Tree name The Eternal Tree of Life planted by the hand of the creator. One of the effects of Gods very act of planting is the high concentration of a substance know as magicules around the tree. Another side effect was that the first individuals of the tribes of the world first appear here. . : .:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Another of its many titles is the Summit of Light and Dark for deep within there is a peak where the first Demonlord and Celestial Sage were inaugurated : : ........................: You can continue to introduce other titles and places within the forest you see you spend so little time within the forest that so much potential is lost. I feel the first volume should be about exploring the forest and seeing what is inside. List what ever you think would be great to explore maybe a cavern, a lake, a monolith whatever you want. The only thing to leave as the final place is something that would lead in to the title of your next chapter The First Holy War it could be a fallen sword or a statue of an angel or what ever just leave people wanting to come back to read more
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