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You're doing a great job dood! I think it may just be word choices and the flow that sometimes messes me up. I know that a lot of the words are kind of hard to translate like Bai Ma Yi, so I try to not count it against you. Maybe you can try translating weapons like Sky Piercer, Lu Bu's weapon, into English. Keep up the good work dood!

This is a brilliant story if you like Romance of the Three Kingdoms. It is a world similar to Total War: Three Kingdoms if I have to make a comparison. I love the story so far (Ch. 43). You can see the MC using his knowledge to put himself in an advantageous position. The only downside is that the grammar is not the best. You can tell that many words are mtl. All in all, I would recommend this book.