Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

11d

Commented

No, that was far too dangerous. The tradeoff wouldn't be worth it, and it would leave too much of a trial for those with sinister intentions to follow.

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

1mth

Commented

typo, properly it should be The* three Ogres are* definitely formidable. You can just use were* as well if you want, love the story tho, keep it up!

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Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

2mth

Commented

not necessarily, if the author wants cameras, let there be cameras

"Oh, Silvana wasn't lying... This is really no different from the real experience. No wonder there's such a long line for these cameras, even among the Phantoms." Adam looked at his hands, on which tiny grains of sand were falling, few in millions.

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

6mth

Commented

10/10, barbatos still has the best thoughts

'This version of him seems like someone who would roughly devour me like a beast for days and not even cuddle afterwards...'

Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

Games · Adui

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

6mth

Commented

actually it's his five head now, it's evolved not even its final form.

It was a rope that went around Lyrian's forehead while he walked or climbed up the side of the mountain, with a giant rock attached to the bottom of the rope.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

6mth

Commented

what about his parents? did he just abandon them and go off to do some caveman stuff 😂😭

After cultivating Gale throughout the night, Lyrian entered the forest once again at the dawn of the following day.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

6mth

Replied to BlueCactusE

no no, let him cook

"Impossibru," Terry said. "I can't use that technique again. It consumed too much of my energy. The enemies outside should be plenty wounded as well. So, we can deal with them as long as we work together inside here."

Only My Weapons Level UP

Urban · TheVillain00

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

7mth

Commented

he's at least "emerald"

The other youngsters also couldn't believe it. They wore bitter smiles on their faces. They had originally thought Ye Li was a bronze-level player, but they hadn't expected him to be a king-level player.

Apocalypse: God-level Zombie Synthesis System

Urban · Hundred Battle Green Armor

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

8mth

Commented

also a typo here, leonel's name is messed up

In the recent days, because of Leoenl and Aina, many had begun thinking that the gap between the Sixth and Seventh Dimensions wasn't so large after all. If they put in more effort and took their training more seriously, they could maybe be like Leonel and Aina…

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Jack_Pengu_of_Yin

8mth

Commented

there's a typo here, "what he could do, even with his intelligence"

Although Leonel had partially deduced this matter, there was still a limit in what he could do evne with his intelligence when information was so limited, especially when there were so many other answers that likewise made sense. It also didn't help that the answer simply didn't seem all that important.