AUTomatic360

7mth

Commented

This chapter was a MESS! 1stPOV should be illegal to use, if the author doesn't have someone proficient in the english language to do the proofreading.

ch 0 7 Chapter 7 Senju when they went home

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9mth

Commented

why is he considered brave for trying to commit suicide in front of the enemy? i would understand it, if it was a suicide attack, where he goes all out to kill as many enemies as possible, but just killing yourself, so that they have one less obstacle?

Fang Qing looked at Lin Fan and nodded. "Senior Brother Lu, Junior Brother heard about the incident that occurred yesterday. I never expected that Junior Brother Lin would be so brave that he would go against such a large number of Sunshine Sect disciples. He even chose to commit suicide than die under their hands."

It's Lonely To Be Invincible

Eastern · Xin Feng

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9mth

Commented

his elixir only works until c-rank. how can a lower ranking elixir help someone to get to ss rank?

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Villain Is on Vacation

Fantasy · Madwriter_2377

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10mth

Commented

i've read so many chinese novels where "little girls and small boys" are 18-20 year old people, that i cant take it seriously anymore...

Could it be that he was too handsome and had an outstanding temperament that aroused the desires of some little girls?

Realizing This Is A Wuxia World After Cultivating For 300 Years

Eastern · Sole Cloud Flying Cave

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10mth

Replied to AUTomatic360

wasn't that guy who fought the frog gone for 6 months? with all the other time skips + the fact, that they didn't mention his age (16) anymore it seemed like more time had passed.

Half a year ago, the Xuanyi Mountain Sect had yet to rise. Su Yan had never even heard of it, so how could she care?

Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster

Games · Nine Cuts

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10mth

Commented

that was only half a year ago? i would have bet, that it's been at least 2 years since then...

Half a year ago, the Xuanyi Mountain Sect had yet to rise. Su Yan had never even heard of it, so how could she care?

Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster

Games · Nine Cuts

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1yr

Replied to zeypher

It's not about that, but if a muggle were to get his hands on such a bag (accidently or not) it could have catastrophic consequences. Even if someone is filmed casting magic, noone would believe that it's real (well maybe in the 90s), but such an item would be hard to ignore.

Ancient Runes: It was an interesting subject, like learning a new alphabet. Only this alphabet could make things invisible, or fire-proof. I started this one a year and a half into my tutoring so I was not able to get as far as I wanted, just finished O.W.L level. I found the subject genuinely fascinating, as it lets one empower objects to accomplish certain task by engraving a symbol and imparting some magical energy into it. I was even able to use a set of Runes to create four matching expanded storage bags with the Bones family coat of arms, using my own original combination of Runes to mimic the undetectable extension charm. Susan really liked hers and started wearing all over the place, aunt Amelia thanked me for the thoughtful gift and switched over to using it, Tilly on the other broke down when she got one too and proclaimed an even greater everlasting will to serve our family. It was really hard to stop her from being overzealous after that one.

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

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2yr

Replied to Invoke_Static

Or, he is one of the very few people who is not only hardworking and intelligent, but also has had the rare opportunity to study the 2nd hokages skills. Because I don't think just anyone can look into the forbidden scroll and minato was lucky enough to not only show enough potential, but also be jirayas student. (and considered loyal enough)

"Yes, you have an affinity for Space. But what surprised me is how high your affinity for space is. It took me five minutes of continuous Chakra Supply to transfer the seal completely from one scroll to another. Five minutes is considered very good for Space affinity, but you just did it in a matter of a few seconds. It implies that your affinity for space is way too high. I am shocked because we of the Namikaze bloodline specializes in Space element but you are Uchiha and still possess such a powerful Space affinity. I wonder what other secrets do you hold?"

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

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2yr

Commented

aren't Hyenas actually nocturnal?

Since he knew about the hyenas' camp, he would become their nightmare starting tonight!

I Became A Mighty Lion

Sci-fi · Demon Cat

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2yr

Commented

with all of these drunk people around, I'd rather think she has liver-problems...

"Is she frequently have been experiencing pain in her abdomen?" she might have Pancreatic Cancer, even in the modern world, that kind of cancer has 95% fatality.

A Paladin in Demon Slayer

Anime & Comics · Mister_Ren

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2yr

Commented

at least it's not a gender-bendered Issei...

There was also a brown haired boy of the same age of Tanjiro and Shinobu, who came along with Shinobu's mother.

Tanjiro's Dragon Evolution System (DxD Fanfic)[On Hiatus]

Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign

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2yr

Commented

I thought he could only nullify 'punishments'?

Logically speaking, Truth Listener was able to nullify any evil powers, but there was no invincible power in this world. Zhou Wen still hadn't figured out what kind of evil powers Truth Listener could nullify.

Let Me Game in Peace

Urban · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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2yr

Commented

"Isn't… Isn't that an antelope?" Li Xuan sprawled on the ground as he looked at the languid antelope in astonishment, his face wearing a look of disbelief.

Let Me Game in Peace

Urban · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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2yr

Commented

Aren't they normally mostly fighting over resources? Medical Pills, Cultivation Techniques, Dragon Veins, Animal Companions etc.?

Cultivating was just fascinating. You could train to live as long as you want, never get sick, and if you don't provoke everyone you walk by, you could probably even cultivate until godhood. In contrast, I would hide to cultivate to get stronger before coming to a world like that. It is nonsense that some characters get to a strong, eats the weak world, and start to provoke everyone for the most minor things.

Cultivating in My Hero Academia

Anime & Comics · LukasS

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2yr

Replied to Kutu

I'm not really angry or anything. Maybe it sounds ruder or more agressive in english or in written form, but I was only trying to get my point across the way I would normally talk. (and here I thought the GIFs would make it more lighthearted) I also didn't really want to critizise the author with my first comment. It was just an observation that most Fanfictions treat Narutos Henge as something special even though it isn't and because of reading so many FFs where it is written that way people think its canon. Somewhere in my memory I also thought there was a scene in the anime, where someone was surprised they could touch his transformed form, but that seems to have been my imagination.

'I wonder how no one ever realized he actually transforms instead of it just being an illusion. Was worth using my sharingan to copy.'

A Sasuke with Control

Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie

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2yr

Replied to Kutu

Are you an idiot? 'I wonder how no one ever realized 'he' actually transforms instead of it just being an illusion' refers to 'Narutos advanced version Henge' that the MC copied from Naruto with his sharingan. Narutos Henge is the same as everyone elses. So what if Naruto can transform into a shuriken? Everyone else can, too. If, what you want to say is, that other people didn't realize Henge is a transformation and only Naruto knows about this, the MC wouldn't have to copy Narutos Version in particular.

'I wonder how no one ever realized he actually transforms instead of it just being an illusion. Was worth using my sharingan to copy.'

A Sasuke with Control

Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie

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2yr

Replied to Kutu

Are you the type of person that forgets what they have read after they start a new paragraph? he specifically wrote he used 'Narutos advanced Henge' and that nobody realised that its not an illusion. Well of course it's not an illusion, because even the normal henge that every little wannabe ninja learns is NOT an illusion.

'I wonder how no one ever realized he actually transforms instead of it just being an illusion. Was worth using my sharingan to copy.'

A Sasuke with Control

Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie

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2yr

Commented

Vanilla FTW!

By the time Kira arrived back at the mansion, he saw a smirking Akame at the very front of the gate, and at that, he knew he lost.

Solo Leveling Through the Multiverse

Anime & Comics · NoirZero11

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2yr

Replied to DonaldSenju

The attackers are a part of the northern tribes, not the Empire. And he could take out the smallfry with conquerers haki and then use his other cheats to get rid of the rest... and even if he wanted to stay low key, he doesn't even try to save his family.

Ok so far, this damn Danger Beasts is taking so long to hunt the only reason I hunt is that is when Esdeath leaves to hunt I also leave as well to avoid the attack coming to our village.