RomanceDawn

2mth

Commented

dude.. you're excluding the father and mother in the family. seriously a big reveal for no good reason or twist. it could be done better.. and btw hating it is nothing to do with being revealed but how it is done..

Also, I'd seriously want to ask one thing. This scene was inspired by the anime, 'Ascendance of a bookworm', no one in the anime community hated that scene then why here? If you know then tell me in the comments of this paragraph, if it's something I can improve without changing the plot then I will.

Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

Fantasy · moon_senpai

RomanceDawn

10mth

Commented

he's just that powerful.. pitiful mc.

Well, just rumors.

Naruto: Reborn With a System!

Anime & Comics · Nutella_

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

what balance?

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Reincarnated With A Summoning System

Fantasy · Aoki_Aku

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

lol dex for movement speed... what kind of archer is this?

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Reincarnated With A Summoning System

Fantasy · Aoki_Aku

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

im not a math expert but bro there is a box called calculator.. or try counting is 12 is bigger or 20..

However, the time displayed on the screen at the entrance of a bank was October 2021.

The Star Beast Hunter Who Sews Up Corpses

Sci-fi · Sunflower

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

i cant feel the lord of mysteries vibe.. it tag as wish fulfillment or something..

Seeking Help

Lord of Mysteries: Starting As A Reader

Book&Literature · ordinary_people

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

zero math skill.. or unworldly intelligence..

[Skills] : Bite level 3,

Evolving into a Great Dragon From a Koi Fish

Fantasy · Eternal Dream

RomanceDawn

1yr

Commented

*breathlessness sound effect*

Hey, it's me. Do you guys know better ways to express breathlessness than huff? I couldn't think of something better right now, but if I find something I will change it.