/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter: Professor Astaroth
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Born to the Most Ancient and Noble Astaroth Family before their demise he is raised by the Aunt and Uncle of Lily Evans.
Marauder's and Hogwarts Era
Of course MC will be in Ravenclaw and will have only one love interest.
Obviously AU but will stick mostly to canon
Also expect major time-skips in the marauder's era as it is a time of peace.
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Meh, it was interesting, but not recommended... I never liked James and lily, and the romance that arises from the ball of the original author between those two pj, is painfully stupid, and here it is repeated, being that You've seen how stupid James's pj is... It almost makes you want to hit the author, but they're something better and that's calling this in a bad way, period.
The author has potential. There’s no doubt about that. The issues I have with this story is that grammar is terrible. The sentences are wayyyyyy to long and really needed to be broken up. The charcter interactions are wierd and feel almost unnatural. The topics and tone of the convos continuously change which is off putting. The main character seems to be the heir of a super duper family. And I mean that literally. I MEAN HES RELATED TO THE POPE (I found that hilarious). Being the heir also grants him some very cool powers which I won’t get into. (Im not into all that heir and extra powers stuff so it’s why it’s a thumbs down from me) He’s a gary stu pretty much. He’s incredibly talented/powerful and it seems he’ll get even more so. I’m a fan of those characteristics but not to the point he is in the story. It seems a bit too much imo. With the pace hes going. I doubt even Voldemort would challenge him in a few years (bare in mind it’s only first year). but then again, the author could introduce OC villains to balance the power scale. So far it’s a story if you want a quick read and not something you truly want to dive into. The concept is cool even though it’s been done quite a few times before. There are quite a few differences to the others which I find rather cool. Such as his upbringing. All in all. It’s an ’meh’ story with a terrible grammar problem. Like I said before the author has potential. If they truly practice this craft and hone their talent. They could become an amazing author.
worth reading, but you woudln't miss anything if you don't the story is really just a summary and sometimes a sentence is missing, so don't expect a thorough explanation and its droped so ...
just found it and yep it's good MC for so far good not an idiot walking around And for the world background, it's not too much because it's still at the beginning of the story so keep it up