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Ruthless Business man
Autor: Bharati_Singha_7905
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The story revolves around the main character Dasagriva a sussiful business man . In this journey he will endure many people and some times he will endure mythical creatures at the end of the story he will become an unstoppable force that god's also fears he will become the Shadow Emperor the makes of widows and the slayer of Gods .
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bland. the characters are not explained properly. everything is just surfacely touched. the chapters are way too short, it kills immersion. your vocabs are fine, the grammar too. research on how to write. read good books. can be improved. would be better if you did a rewrite