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In the virtual world of online games, he dominated and suppressed miracles with absolute control!
The eternal passion and fiery blood,
The legendary tale of an immortal tyrant!
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this novel doesn't go into that much detail about the mc or any of the other characters when they do anything from fighting to their downtime. Even the whole game system is confusing ranks, skills, levels items, pets, and even the whole game world is confusing. I'm on quote on quote chapter 19, and so far, it just feels like this whole novel is a summary of another novel just cut down to the bear minimum it's very bad
Im not quite sure what i just read, the story itself sounded like a pre-teens first attemp at wroting a story, And to be honest its to the point im not wven sure if the translator didn’t do well or its the storys fault.
the translation is so bad I can barely understand any of it on top of it having a slow pace with no detail. I couldn't move past chapter 1
Horrible trash from webnovel made even worse by the fact they are once again chopping up chapters into parts so they can make more money
if you check the table of contents you will see how trashy and greedy are the ones handling this novel. segmenting chapter 1-2 of the actual novel into 10 chapters.
1 its basically a wall of text 2, its basically just the characters chaotic thoughts being put down with endless mentions of not enough ladies ,hot ladies, etc3. poorly written (if it's worked on it might be good tho)
the MC just runs around and does things without explaining what's going on never explained any of his skills or powers or describe any of the fights just pops up in a field and starts fighting monsters with some guy we've never even been introduced to as the audience just a terribly written story
Its not a bad read if you got nothing else, it just felt poorly translated cliche most of the time it feels like a copy and paste of every other like VR style game it you got nothing else give it a shot but I wouldn’ really reccomend… To each there own tho
Terrible format, long paragraphs, and five and a half chapters in is chapter one
Format is terrible, long paragraphs. The 1st 5 1/2 chapters are actually chapter 1 of the novel. Chapter literally starts in the middle of chapter 6.