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The standard cheat ability bestowed upon reincarnators and transmigrators turned out to be nothing more than an utterly useless divine artifact.
[Annihilation Maker? But why is my Annihilation Maker so different?]
Tsuna looked at the “Boosted Gear” materialized on his left hand and the “Divine Dividing” on his back, falling into deep thought.
Imagination grants power; reincarnation opens the gate to another world.
“Eh? Eh!! I didn’t mean to transmigrate!”
His first encounter with a girl happened when he fell into a bath in another world.
“Eh? Your name is... Loki?”
Thus begins Tsunayoshi Sawada's life in a new world, and his journey to find the way back home.
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The name is tricky, because it's not TSUNA himself. it's a old dude who got reincarnated as him at KHR. And it's neither Anihilation Maker, that's just a name the author uses to get more views. Yes, it's stated as Anihilation Maker, but it quickly becomes something far too convenient and op quickly because now it suddenly can create things if he just clasificates "things" as "monster". Like creating magical armor or clothes, but the true is that they are actually "monsters" that looks like clothes or armor. Don't expect him to act as Tsuna, because how I said it's an old dude reincarnated on his body, so if you wanted to see tsuna here? sorry, look somewhere else. Besides that, I feel like most of the characters are pretty well managed
Well, this story is turning into one of the most boring and monotonous fanfics. And the funny thing is that it was interesting at the beginning. But after so many chapters, nothing significant has happened... just the same dialogues written differently, although the topic of the dialogues remains absolutely unchanged , and the same goes for the characters' actions. In general, it just became boring, unrealistically boring.
It is very good, the abilities and powers are well explained and each use of it manages to seem to make a lot of sense and logic which feels solid. The reactions are well done, making you want to see more of these when it comes to seeing Mc do something scandalous while no relationship is rushed and everything is built slowly and solidly, an example is the harem tag in the story but at the moment in chapter 80 there is not a single love interest or rushed relationship like the typical nonsense where someone falls in love with Mc after a couple of interactions, which is very appreciated. In short, it's good enough for the moment (chap 80) and we'll have to wait and see how everything goes, my only 'BUT' at the moment would be MC's personality, which seems a bit dry, a little emotionless, could you say? Mo has a great personality or charisma which I think should be added, each dialogue in which he speaks is not accompanied by anything, which one imagines his face to be impassive or without emotions, for example: "Ah, Mrs. Loki, I was recently forced to intervene on the 30th floor after noticing something unusual in the middle of my dream." When you read this, you don't know with what tone of voice, with what face or expression it was said, if at least you don't know something about the person who said it, it seems dry and you don't notice anything behind the dialogue, something changes like this: "Ah, Mrs. Loki, I was recently forced to intervene on the 30th floor when I noticed something unusual in the middle of my dream." The cheerful and innocent voice that Loki was accustomed to woke her abruptly from her dream. This already serves to give much more context and life to the dialogue because you do many things in a single step, you give personality and charisma to whoever says it and you know how that sentence was said and with what mood and that is what the protagonist Tsuna lacks, he does not have personality and his dialogues are dry as a machine and a protagonist without charisma is not attractive because he seems like a secondary character, all the protagonists share something in common and it is They have a great charisma behind them: Ichigo with his rebellious attitude, Asta with his loud and positive attitude, Bell himself with his shy and embarrassing personality and so on. Obviously, you don't always have to add something to the dialogue if you know in advance what the character is like and his way of speaking but you haven't done that with Tsuna. You haven't told us what his way of speaking is like, his expressions when speaking or his temperament, one can get an idea but it's more guessing and assuming than anything, I hope you follow some of my advice because I really like the story so far!
pretty boring, why did mc choose loki cause her familia is strong that's all..... anyways for me out 5 i give 2/5 overall cause i don't quite like loki to began with...author himself lie with his eye open about loki is beauty in danmachi..out of many main and supporting character loki is behind
His cheat was kinda OP. Unfortunately this MC limiting his own cheat.. But hey i like the story so far thanks for the fic tho
keep up the great work..............................................................................................................................
10/10, good book, quality translation. I saw the raw name but cant for the life of me find a mtl site that has this book. If someone could bless me with a link I would be utmost grateful
The fic has a whole "I'm not going to push myself" stuff that is kind of annoying... Sure, this isn't dbz but his training methods produced results and he or any of the others never seem to go through the dungeon aside from once. This fic is missing action. So far it just feels like immense filler. The only reason I gave it 5 stars is because the translator has translated it very well.
𝗛𝗲𝘆❟ 𝗜 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗶𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝘄｡ 𝗛𝗼𝗻𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗹𝘆❟ 𝗶𝘁 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝘀𝗼 𝘃𝗶𝘃𝗶𝗱❟ 𝗹𝗶𝗸𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗵𝗼𝗹𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗶𝗻 𝗺𝘆 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗜 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱｡ 𝗜’𝗺 𝗮𝗻 𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗶𝘀𝘁❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗜 𝘂𝘀𝘂𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗼𝗻 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗺𝗶𝘀𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗪𝗲𝗯𝘁𝗼𝗼𝗻𝘀❟ 𝗖𝗼𝗺𝗶𝗰𝘀❟ 𝗠𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗮❟ 𝗖𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗔𝗿𝘁❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗖𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗔𝗿𝘁｡ 𝗔𝗻𝗱 𝗵𝗼𝗻𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗹𝘆❟ 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 𝗵𝗮𝘀 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘀𝗽𝗮𝗿𝗸 𝘁𝗼 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸 𝗮𝗯𝘀𝗼𝗹𝘂𝘁𝗲𝗹𝘆 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗻𝗻𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘀 𝗮 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗶𝗰 𝗼𝗿 𝘄𝗲𝗯𝘁𝗼𝗼𝗻 👀｡ 𝗜’𝗱 𝗯𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 𝗲𝘅𝗰𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝘁𝗼 𝗯𝗿𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗶𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗹𝗶𝗳𝗲 𝘃𝗶𝘀𝘂𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 (𝗻𝗼 𝗽𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘀𝘂𝗿𝗲❟ 𝗼𝗳 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗿𝘀𝗲❟ 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝗜 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱𝗻’𝘁 𝗿𝗲𝘀𝗶𝘀𝘁 𝘁𝗿𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴)｡ 𝗜𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂’𝗱 𝗹𝗶𝗸𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗮 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸 𝗮𝘁 𝗺𝘆 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸❟ 𝗼𝗿 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗺𝗼𝗿𝗲 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮❟ 𝗳𝗲𝗲𝗹 𝗳𝗿𝗲𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗰𝗵 𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗼𝗻 𝗗𝗶𝘀𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗱 👉 𝗯𝗲𝗻𝗻𝗲𝘁𝘁_𝗹𝗼𝗹 𝗟𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗼𝗿𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝘁𝗼 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗿 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘁𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁𝘀!
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Hello! I recently finished reading your story and wanted to express my sincere admiration for your work. The clarity, depth, and vivid imagery within your writing are truly commendable. Each scene felt thoughtfully crafted, and the world you built was rich with detail. As a professional artist, I would be honored to collaborate with you should you ever wish to explore a visual adaptation. Please feel free to reach out at your convenience. You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love
Im only at chapter 25 but i have to write it out of me. Quality writing and grammer, really great work at that. The story definetly has potencial. But damn talking about the definition if slow pace. 25 chapter and one day had passed. Repeating the same thing over and over with his potencial and ability and all that. And all just spekulation we dont really see him doing anything. Of course you can say that, yes its his first day with hus ability, but we read 25 chapters of that first day. Until he himself said it i didnt even think abaout it, just grumling in myself that yeah can we move on? Serious paceing issu, imo
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Hey there! I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading your story, it’s got that cinematic quality that instantly made me imagine it as a comic. I do freelance commission-based comic work, and your story would translate beautifully into visuals. Would you be open to discussing what that might look like? I’m on Discord (harper_clark) or Instagram (_harperr_).
Hello everyone! This is a Danmachi fanfic featuring a main character from Katekyo Hitman Reborn! He wields the Annihilation Maker, and his version is far more powerful than the original! I hope you enjoy the story — don’t forget to leave a review! :)