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The Forgotten Ability
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As a young woman Adair Fox enters the civilization test, the most difficult test in the entirety of the Galactic Empire, in hopes of achieving that highest of honors and finally becoming eligible to meet her parents. During the test Adair acts out of desperation and uses a dangerous ritual to save her people, only to get betrayed by them shortly after. Unfortunately not only does Adair fail the test, but she also finds herself trapped in a void for thousands of years until she eventually meets up with another being. She makes a deal with the Reincarnation Machine, which allows her to go back in time and become a sorceress.
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I love this story so far, it becomes almost instantly captivating and brings out your curiosity in the plot. I'm looking forward to discovering what will happen as the story unfolds. The writing quality is superb, and the author spoils you with the long chapters. I have high hopes to see where this story goes.
The writing quality is pretty good. Although it’s a bit confusing when describing the inner dialogue. The story flows at a nice slow pace, no plot holes. My main issue is I read up to chapter 50 and the FL has yet to make any significant decision in her personal life. She doesn’t at any point really have a personal choice in what happens to her. Her character doesn’t bother me really, besides for a little over thinking, but the story developement makes for a very passive MC. I prefer a more active MC. Although this might change later in the novel. Thanks for the read
Author Review: Let me start off with saying that I am slightly biased since this is my story, but I believe that every author is to a certain extent. Now on to the review. For the writing quality I am a new author and this is my first time writing a book of this sort so while I believe that it is pretty good I almost guarantee that there will be at least a few errors. That being said I read every comment so if you see an error please point it out, so I can fix it as quick as possible. For the stability of updates, I am publishing 1 chapter a day, which I plan on continuing for the foreseeable future. For the story development, this may be a weak part of my writing. I am taking quite a bit of time going into detail on many sections, which slows down the story quite a bit. If you are not looking for that in a book, I completely understand. Lastly, the world building. I believe I do a pretty good job with the world building. This causes the story to slow down quite a bit, but I believe that it is a good tradeoff. I hope you enjoy the story. :)