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The author has a big heart. Most books have great world building, great story, great writing. However most books still fail. The reason, they fail is in the character department. The characters are none existent, they are robots, psychopaths. This book does it differently, the characters feel human. It sounds like such a small thing. However it what differentiates an ordinary novel to a great book. So if you are an aspiring author, this book is a great study on how improve your character design.

I agree 100%. Only reading the oracle path before coming across this gem. Most other stories just don't have what these two stories have in common. Creativity, description and good English(sad to say that, but lots of stories hurts my brain to read since English is not their first language). There are more points to add, but these 3 are enough to eliminate all the stories on this cite. A more personal point for myself is the genre. I really enjoy the genre of these two novels. An epic fantasy world with all the scales tipped just right. Overall, I am so happy to find a second story that is not just hyper focused on the MC. Instead a story that has a backbone, with a environment and other characters. This lets the story not be as simple as black and white. Bust so much more colorful.

A hidden gem. The story progression is unique. Little if no tropes can be found. Its an imaginative adventure tale full of intense battles and companionship moments. Note: I am still in shock that a story of this breed can be posted on this cite. Like seriously, the amount time put to planning is not crazy, but abnormal compared to many of the top popular 100 books. Planning as an trying to create something new and not using existing tropes like 99.97 of the stories. Also not ending up bad to boot. I am stop fan-boying, and be totally not stalking any new novels you be releasing. Totally.

A world building like no other. The first few chapters quickly establishes the world. And it has all the elements that make the world epic.

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I recommend telling your viewers when the MC actually joins the game. I almost stopped reading your novel. So comment this after he goes back in time, "If you guys want to start reading when he joins the game, go to chapter, 15. I bet u lost some readers who got disengaged from those chapters between.

I am not reading on this garbage website. But like u said "If you've enjoyed my work, please support me through official channels." Thank I can do. Cheers m8

I took a sneak peak of your latest chapter. And I can see some noticeable improvements in your writing. If you ever write a new book, I will be sure to read it.

No, it wasn't the child that I refereed to. It is the way you structure your sentences that threw me off. Again I bet your story is great, but unfortunately it's difficult for me to read when bad grammar structure keeps appearing.