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If things keep going the way they are prolly the dog.

Man, this god just killed him 3 times. I know Lucas is going to be mad right now. And I smell a lot of false hood in that gods rants bet he just riled him up so he would stop looking for his memories. I smell a conspiracy.

Bad enough he shot him in the head now he killing our hero in his sleep Joe needs to chill. (and if you get that hint in my sentence then your a big fan of a certain someone)

time to get mangekyo sharingan.

Hmm, mastery of fire magic, mastery of lightning magic, has a phoenix pretending to be a black crow, and now a artifact that will give him mind illusion abilities with a glance.Yep I am sensing a Uchiha.

So curious thought do Quinns undead shadows count as living creatures? Cause if they don't then can't Lucas edit the shadows with his pen?

dang it more please 🙏 I want to see him tell her off today.

All I got to say is our boy Rio had shadow guards keeping people back from him, yet they couldn't stop a love struck, guilt ridden, high schooler girl from running up and hugging him. Should I be worried about our security force.

So not only is going to take the MC spotlight he is also going to take his sister. 👏 👏 👏

look at it this way if you don't like it then enjoy Lucas beating Sam though I admit not reading Sam's story I think I will so I can gets some context if I should hate him or not.

If I had to say anything about this scene and the ascendance of a bookworm it's that in the bookworms case it was more impactful because it was both a little Child (on the outside mind you) who and a little girl at that let's face it when you read about a lil girl crying her heart out it will definitely insight some psychological feelings of protectiveness. Now in zero case though it does hit some feels with the sister crying a lil if she was a bit more emotional in my opinion anyway that may give you a more desired effect not to mention instead of a child who's virtually the size of a toddler we have a 15 year old(again on the outside perception) which in most fantasy constitutes he is a adult which does not hit the feels as much as a small child. Not to mention bookworm literally broke down a bit so that hurt alot but zero is more resolved about it and has been in control of his emotions pretty well at least In this chapter I will read the next soon but because he is more composed it takes away from the impact you were looking for. all in all I don't mine the reveal and look forward to what happens next.

He just finished admission test and headed to his room.

there's always a discord.

and dang it I want Lucas to tear into Nero about the reason the vampires were here yes twist the knife in deep.

yah know I feel bad for Sera we left our favorite phoenix behind.