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Read a bit further on, Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.

Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.

Ignore the other idiot. I’ve read far enough. MC gets blocked every 10 levels or so and need to complete mainline quests to continue leveling up. No bottlenecks, my ass!

Bait and switch. summary says no bottlenecks. Inconveniently, he can not continue to level up without completing open ended mainline quests.…every 10 levels or so.

The way the author describes their thought patterns is like an alien describing what it thinks human thought patterns are.

Interesting premise, but every character is dumb as bricks. Female lead is an idiot, first villian is retarded and the main lead is not much better. All in all, infuriating and not worth reading much further.

Quality story. Good world building. Standard low key protagonist.

I thought this would be a light hearted comedy, but it’s not. Seems to be info dump stats and drops. Seems like newbie writer. He needs to work on pacing and scene development. Lack of transition and things happen way too fast without buildup. So pretty flat over all. Noticeable better vocabulary so might be original work instead of translation. Read some great works, imitate and then your scenes and transition will improve.

This doesn’t look like translation. It’s more like English speaking newbie imitating the translated recent Immortal trend. It’s not bad, although the pacing and story development could use some practice. Seems a bit rushed and thrown in your face. No time to connect with the characters. He needs to analyze how some successful books pace their plot lines and imitate that until he’s ready to develope his own style.

This reads more like a English fanfic pretending to a Chinese translation. Story and character development is nonexistent. Move on.

Shit tier writing.… what is that story development. Feels like copy paste by someone who has no imagination or writing skills. Move on.

I understand the century of humiliation and the atrocities of Japan during the Second World War. But it’s literally been decades and they can’t stop being butthurt in their literature. That’s just sad. No country is so blatantly xenophobic in their literature and entertainment. Most countries are still xenophobic here and there. Media can be especially polarizing, but entertainment should just be light fun. I’ve read American novels, Korean novels, Japanese novels, and Chinese novels. If it’s just a fantasy novel, they just build their world and ignore the foreign countries. Only Chinese novels explicitly mention foreigners in every novel to shit on them.

Don't bother reading further. After a certain point, it goes really hard into xenophobia. All foreigners are arrogant and evil. They are villains so it's ok to kill them all. Jesus. I get that there is some dark history, but at some point, you got to take the shit out of your ass, unless you want to be butthurt for eternity.

Don’t bother reading further. After a certain point, it goes really hard into xenophobia. All foreigners are arrogant and evil. They are villains so it’s ok to kill them all. Jesus. I get that there is some dark history, but at some point, you got to take the shit out of your ass, unless you want to be butthurt for eternity.

ABsolute trash….. nonstop face slappin and commentary from random nobodies. Not even the good kind. Just regurgitated crap. If you read every word, your brain would melt. Even skimming is barely doable.

The author wrote, My Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts. that has been dropped. he introduces this story in the last chapter.

yeah, the way this one has been rewritten is quite bad. the worst is he coincidentally manages to get the things he needs one by one, no matter how rare. that's BS. Makes the story extremely linear and frankly boring.

very similar, but not the same. either this is a copy plot or the translation did heavy modifications.

I dont think this is a translation. This seems like a newbie author trying to copy successful cliche elements. The first fight made me want to skip. writing style needs improvement.