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love the story so far, the MC is chill and logical. i hope and am eager to see more of this

good story, love the shadow approach. make a patreon and stick to the story please, all the good earning writers try to finish 1 in 2 stories at least to keep an audience.

too much content, too much description without story advancement, you risk making a good character an edge lord, and there you will loose the story and your audience

please no pokephilia but other then that i agree : more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

you have a magnificent sense of humor, i know this site doesnt encourage good writing but please continue to grace us with your brand of insanity ^^

love the story so far

interesting debut, hope that you continue the story

happy to have you back man and i hope the story continues

i love this story, the character is engaging and the pokemon and world are in an interesting balance between dark and canon. the only thing i fear is that the farm is taking a long time in the making and the pokemon are pilling on

love the story and i hope to see you continue it

love the story so far. i think you want the mc to explore and thats the best kind of pokemon fanfics. i hope to read more soon

the story deserves 5 stars. the power progression is interesting and the character is engaging. the only problem i can see manifesting is that you are spending too much time with the main cast of HXH, the most exciting thing about your approach for star wars was that you took to exploring some lore and giving the mc the liberty to disengage from the constrains of canon

love the story so far. relatable Mc and logical power progression

love the story so far, no instant op MC with some good natured and relatable characters. hope to read more soon !

love the story so far, i just hope the flaws of the character can be resolved without edgy traps

i had my doubts when the author deleted chapters for a rewrite but the results are excellent and the story is better for it. the quality is descent and getting better. the character is in need of development but we are just 5ch deep so i think it will come with time