The story idea is brilliant. Very original. It would be even better if the protagonist grew some ruthless bones in his body. If someone in the future will assist the protagonist template of the world, then it would be better to simply remove them from the equation before they're allowed to help the template at all. Proactive elimination of risk.
ch 33 Extraordinary Breakthrough
Eastern · abinn
It's actually simpler than you would think. Why do adventurers go out to fight monsters and complete all sorts of quests? Isn't it just for the quest completion rewards. Make it so that even if women complete goblin extermination quest they won't be rewarded with even a penny. Without the incentive only the fools would still risk their lives.
ch 0 9 Human Hunt II
Fantasy · John_Doever
Ah yes, Narnia. A whole new world inside a wardrobe - love to see it.
ch 14 A Backup Plan
Fantasy · DelzGB
For this genre...it's never a good sign when the MC is smitten with every single women he encounters. Literally. He only saw 2 women in his new life so far...and he's been utterly obsessed with both of them. It's alright to appreciate women, but not to this degree.
ch 0 9 Sister-in-law
Fantasy · abinn
Weird. I thought he would've killed her for her powers? Especially since Freya is the only one who knows that the MC is in-fact just an ordinary student - and he really shouldn't have been able to defeat a S-class monster. Killing her would've been the wise choice, not only does the world remain blissfully unaware of the MCs oddness but he also gets a new power.
ch 0 7 New weapon
Fantasy · abinn
This is great, but I can't help but wonder. Wouldn't it have been more promising for the MC to have been transported at least a decade or two back before cannon even began? This way the alternate-history Prussians would have a foundation of strength. Not to mention also give the MC time to plan against all sorts of cannon disasters that are about to come to Westeros.
ch 0 6 The march south I
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
I honestly don't understand. What's the point of Sam's background and his past? None of it seemingly matters. Sam is instead behaving like the role model good person, he is such a good person, you might as well have made the title 'rebirth protagonist's journey.' He rescues damsels in distress. Feels happy from other people's happiness. Forgiving betrayal with a snap of his fingers is one thing itself is weird, but to forget all his suffering and pretend like none of it happened? Now that's just pathetic.
ch 14 Dale's Group Arrives at Hope Village
Games · rydertheking
MC already white knighting complaining about system '100% loyalty' being no different from brainwashing. Seriously - in Total War: Warhammer world. An indequate MC ruins even the most promising of novels. Alas...
ch 0 4 04. Thinking things through
Fantasy · Warcry_Ayms
So...the point of this story is for the transmigrated MC to lick the protagonist of this world? Helping him in every single way imaginable and possible? This is a new low even for Webnovel standards.
ch 0 1 The Protagonist of the Mercenary King
Urban · HaveYouEaten
Everything so far is reasonable, but I do have doubts regarding MC's aversion to having children. Surely having children with Yu Lei would add extra shackles to their relationship? Furthermore the children themselves can be used as assets in the future. Our MC isn't going to be young forever after all.
ch 10 *Yu Lei*
Urban · SKuLL
Brutal. Realistic. Pragmatic. This is how alt-history should be written.
ch 15 Imperial Crown Prince and King of Bolivia
History · Well_In_a_Frog
This behaviour is shockingly cliche. From MC being stunned at how beautiful FMC is, to the cheesy picklines and kindness the FMC showed. Not to mention the the chapters previously (being rescued by an old granda with a 15-year granddaughter). Oh can't forget the MC also likes to monologue about kindness every now and again. The synopsis and the actual content of the story simply isn't matching up.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4 Taking revenge for a brother
Urban · DaasWolfe
The revenge was satisfying. Everything she craves is deprived. Wealth. Beauty. Pleasure. And now she's left to live rest of her life in a mental asylum. Occasionally experience some Victorian mental health correction sessions.