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2018-08-26 Unido Philippines

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Maybe let them be the audience witnessing Dr. Hall conduct his treatment or therapy on Sylvester? So that they would be able to know what Sylvester’s condition is firsthand.

Dr. Hall knew that they were so close in healing Sylvester, but that opportunity was being taken away. He said, "There should be another way, no?" 

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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Inspector to Sergeant Gruger:

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Sergeant Gruger, who had been observing quietly, interjected with a note of inevitability, "I knew this was going to happen." His remark, however, was met with a sharp glance from the inspector, silencing him immediately.

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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"Everyone will be put under arrest! Out of the room! Call for backup!" barked one of the officers, as the room was cleared with people being forcibly removed.

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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The room erupted, with some starting to tear down whatever they could lay their hands on. Guards rushed in just as chaos peaked, and amid the turmoil, an object flew, striking Judge Reynolds on the head. Blood began to trickle down his face, marking the physical toll of the confrontation.

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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If only Sylvester’s situation could be easily perceived by any of these victims’ families, they wouldn’t be behaving themselves like this in unruliness. Judge Reynolds had pondered and judged accordingly what was thoughtfully just and deserved by the accused.

"Mrs. Daniel," he began, his voice steady despite the charged atmosphere, "please understand, this decision wasn't influenced by money. The court reviewed every aspect of the case thoroughly. Sylvester Crowley has been diagnosed with a severe mental disorder. He is not a criminal in the traditional sense; he is a patient in need of treatment—"

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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You just didn’t know it, Mr. Brooks, but your daughter Margot, if she were Sylvester’s co-worker in the opera house, could be sued for men’s sexual harassment in the workplace if it were to happen in these times.

"If he was truly ill, he should have recovered by now!" Mr. Brooks's voice cracked with emotion. "No one remains sick this long unless they're feigning it! My poor daughter…" His voice faltered, choked by tears. "What did she do to deserve such brutality? You didn't see how I found her… her eyes gone… her heart…"

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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Neither there was bribery nor any underhanded means involved in the final verdict of these cases pertaining to the Scarecrow murderer, Mrs. Daniel.

Beside him, Sebastian Daniel's mother shook with fury, her eyes blazing as she confronted the judge. "Why the delay? Is it because he bribed you? Name your price, then! I'll pay double, triple if needed! All I want is to see that cold-blooded monster hang. He deserves no mercy!"

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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Correction, Mr. Brooks. The murderer is being treated in an institution and not absolutely roaming free, as you say.

Margot Brooks's father, his face contorted with fury, pounded his fist on the judge's desk. "She was my daughter!" he bellowed, the raw grief palpable in his voice. "Five months have passed, and still, no justice! How is it that the murderer roams free while we suffer?"

Scarecrow of 1889

Scarecrow of 1889

History · ash_knight17

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wrapped*

With a soft whisper of fabric against the night's breath, His hand was on the door and the knuckles on his fingers rapped gently against the weathered door. The sound echoed through the stillness, reverberating with an eerie finality.

The Death Collector

The Death Collector

Fantasy · AkumaQuil

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on the* inside

The house stood in solemn silence, it's windows veiled in curtains of midnight as there was hardly any lantern lit on inside. It was as if the house was trying on it's own to shield what was about to take place within. 

The Death Collector

The Death Collector

Fantasy · AkumaQuil

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its* windows on its* own

The house stood in solemn silence, it's windows veiled in curtains of midnight as there was hardly any lantern lit on inside. It was as if the house was trying on it's own to shield what was about to take place within. 

The Death Collector

The Death Collector

Fantasy · AkumaQuil

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of her* beloved husband

She sighed and wondered why Vina painted her daughter black to all of them, she called her daughter a nuisance, when in fact the girl was very kind and sweet, and despite how young she was Vina wanted to sacrifice Khalilah instead; Rose-Anne shook her head, Khalilah reminded her of my beloved husband, he was calm and sweet just like the girl.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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You’ve mixed first person and third person’s POV.

Cherry, the housekeeper showed Khalilah to her room and she was also thoughtful enough to help her unpack my bags.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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her* bags

Cherry, the housekeeper showed Khalilah to her room and she was also thoughtful enough to help her unpack my bags.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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she pushed*

Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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it was* morning

Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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Sunlight streamed*

Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.

Fated to the King of Death

Fated to the King of Death

Fantasy · DanitaMimi

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