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"no superhuman brain or genius-level IQ" but the author forgot to warn that he also has no personality, a sack of potatoes probably has more personality than him, the volleyball from the movie Cast Away has more personality, man The dog has more personality and would be a more charismatic protagonist than Noah Osmont. Author, explain to me how to like the work if I can't even get attached to the protagonist and his ideals. ps. I don't care if he's motivated by revenge or anything but I just can't feel anything for the protagonist, I think you should go back to the beginning and rewrite the soul of the novel in a more appropriate way. The protagonist is so superficial that if I'm reading and adding a stick as a protanist it won't affect the reading, I'm not lying, maybe a stick is more interesting than Noah.

This is the fourth time I've tried to read it and the fourth time I've dropped it. I always forget why I stopped reading and try again and that might be the last time. The biggest problem is the protagonist, he doesn't have a well-described description, his personality is all messed up and I can't understand or get attached to him, his motivation is "revenge" but it seems like a tantrum from a child who lost the candy, even the protagonists of xianxia novels who are always fighting with arrogant young masters are more acceptable than this protagonist here. The protagonist's plot armor is also very ridiculous, the protagonist gets what the author wants without a shred of respect to have a good explanation, the dragon in chapter 60 also just proves what a mess the protagonist is, he rose from a normal human being to the strongest on the planet in 2 weeks and doesn't even show a problem with it, the personality seems like an NPC who is ordered to do anything, and don't be fooled into thinking that he's cold or emotionless, he's not nothing, or better said, it is what the author wants it to be at the moment. That's why the reading is tasteless, I can't get attached to the protagonist and I don't even feel anything for him, if I change the protagonist I would think fine, and I'm someone who hasn't watched Game of Thrones because it doesn't have a fixed protagonist so I don't care. Caring about changing this protagonist shows how worthless this protagonist is. I feel sad that this novel has such a high rating and I would like to know how it has more than 2 thousand chapters when the first 50 are so rushed and poorly written, this must be the only reason I keep coming back, curious if the author created IQ out of nowhere and learned to write or just readers are reading with their toes. But I promise myself never to go back.

I dropped in chapter 643, there is a lot happening in the story and a lot of mystery but the events are not well written. For example, fl was almost kidnapped but that only lasted half a chapter, was it so quick that I only thought that? , when she talks about her past to ml I think it lasted 5 or 6 sentences, it ends up leaving that horrible taste in the mouth that something is missing, there's a lack of dialogue, there's no need to delve deeper into the explanations and events, everything seems so shallow, I was really enjoying the novel but the author still managed to disappoint, there is still so much to be discovered but if there continues to be no better description, it won't be worth it. Finally, the novel no longer conveys a feeling of attachment, I read the last chapters without any desire.

I'm on chapter 567 and so far it's still above average for a novel with this type of plot, after reading so many bad novels in the last few months I'm pleased to have found this one. I will only mention the extreme parts that I found a problem so far to help those who want to read it too. Firstly, there's a lot of idiotic nationalism that gets annoying at times, if the plot and mystery weren't good I wouldn't continue because of that. Second, instead of making her transfer from a thousand years ago, the author could have been more intelligent and made her transmit to a thousand years ago, live a new life there without memories of the current one and after death in the great xia dysnatia, return to time current person with more experience and a desire to correct the mistakes he made, because the idea of ​​the author transmitting and possessing the original body is that cliché that leaves the story full of holes where only the ml realizes that there is something wrong with it while everyone else has negative IQ for what her body did in the past, if the author followed my idea I think I would make the description of her richer and her love more pleasant besides she could face the mistakes of the past in a much better written way, unlike now where the fl just fixes everything and that's it, there's not even another consequence or feeling involved in it (ps. the only problem left by the original body that was more or less well resolved was that of xiao bao besides him, the entire past is practically ignored or resolved by superimposing her current image over the previous one). Apart from these two points, I still think it is acceptable to continue reading the novel.

One day I was forced to watch Peppa Pig for 5 hours straight, I'm in chapter 318 and that's how I feel currently reading this novel, that I'm being forced to watch Peppa Pig again. The plot is very childish, it seems written for children aged 7 or younger, there is a chapter where I keep counting on my finger the logical errors that are happening. It has very good funny parts but the 4.7 rating is overinflated, for me the maximum rating should be 4 and I think the current one only exists because they are deleting reviews with few stars because no matter what I think, someone who has already read some novels is unlikely to give a such a high rating without considering so many problems in the novel, I will do my part and give 1 star to try to reduce this horrible average of 4.7 so that there are no more people fooled like me.

If anyone is interested in my review and the reason for this review, I wrote it in Muthoni_Murira's comment. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I completely agree with this review, I still continued reading because I'm used to cliches but the author punched me in the stomach with a horrible plot in the final 50 chapters with the chapter called "biological daughter", I thought it was horrible but there are only 50 chapters left to finish so I can finish this novel, my friends, how could I be so wrong and surprise myself that the author could make it even worse hahahaha laughing in disgust hahahaha I dropped it in chapter 980, regret, disgust, sadness, joy for stopping reading this, a lot of emotions for a lot of wasted time, in this review it was given a rating of 2/5 but I think that's too much, if I could give a negative rating I would, it goes on my list as the worst novel I've read in my life and look what already I've read more than 100 novels in all these years and today I discovered what it's like to literally vomit while reading a book. Finally, I have to give credit to the author who managed to surpass the other authors for managing to create a novel that already had dozens of holes caused by the usual "alzhaimer" of these types of novels because in the last chapters of dozens of holes in the plot he managed to multiply this by 10 or 20 times with a single plot, congratulations author, many congratulations, probably even the gpt chat knows how to maintain a better plot. I will never read anything by this author again so as not to affect my brain.

It was supposed to be a good wine but was forced to age. I think the author received good feedback about the gay interactions that were being fun at the beginning and decided to increase it by 10x thinking that it would improve even more and keep more readers to pay.

I dropped it because the author forces things too much, for example the gay interactions were very good but there comes a moment when you realize that the author starts to force this all the time which irritates, just the initial plot of being reincarnated in modern times is cool after This turns into a total family drama, I thought it would show more about FL by doing business and learning about modern times but that doesn't happen and when it does it's just a moment to explain the reasons for FL. I read almost 400 chapters and I dropped it when Pei Huai's parents got divorced because, as I said, the author likes to force everything, for me it's okay that Ml's father doesn't love his mother but him falling in love with that actress is diminishing a character who does not have a negative IQ, the actions of ml's father do not match how he was described and it is very disgusting to see such a blatant contradiction in a character, so it is blatant that the author only forced this to continue and further strengthen gay interactions that he implemented/strong women. Ps: Describing it, it seems like I'm homophobic but that was so forced that I lost all my interest that the author gained in the first 250 chapters, when I was still in the 250 chapters I thought the novel deserved 5/5 but then a 3/5 is the best that I can classify.

It was fun to read even with a lot of mistakes, I read up to chapter 563 but it got tiring, the last 100 or 200 chapters seemed like the same thing so I couldn't bear to continue. If anyone gives me spoilers that it gets better later I'll come back but for now I can't continue because it was too boring. Another thing, the novel is very light, there's no suspense, drama or anything, it's just a light showbiz read, the fl's enemies are defeated so easily that I don't even know if it's possible to consider them real enemies, and the system is forced, there are a thousand features but it doesn't have much use for FL, for example she increased her IQ by 10 points becoming very intelligent but when she increases it to 100 there are no changes, she just increases it to 100 because the system forces her to increase it. There are a lot of things in the system but where I left off the author only uses it to have plot content, with the system already overwhelming the novel I imagine without then. Another thing is that there are a lot of characters, the author started throwing characters wherever he could, while reading I kept thinking where this character came from without explanation or I kept trying to remember the name of that character because there must be more than 50 characters presented.

I read up to chapter 404 but I couldn't stand it and came to read the comments and I'm glad I did, now I can drop it with a clear mind. For people thinking about reading, don't waste your time, two months in the novel's chronological line in 400 chapters with small boring plots and little plot that is really worth it. I'm sure the last 100 chapters of the 700 will be rushed.

I dropped it in chapter 182 because the girl simply went to apologize to the guy who almost killed her mother and even created a device for his damaged brain because she felt guilty for beating him too much. ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! The only good thing about this novel is the villain Hou You, she is constructed so well that I feel sorry for her even though she has done so many things wrong, I think she was the closest to the reality of a character who goes back years in time after suffering torture that could be , I thought she was very silly for someone who went back in time but then I analyzed it and I believe I have never seen a character as well thought out as she was, unfortunately she only saves the entire novel the rest is just a 2/5 at best .

I agree, ml is described as a superman but he is well below expectations, I thought that fl would be a strong woman because of her fight with her stepmother but after that she lost all the brain she had, in short if you are a masochist read it because you will be in anguish reading it

I found the beginning forced because there was no reason for everyone to really betray him but I continued reading until there was rape in chapter 62. For me, threatening to have sex is rape and if you say otherwise you need to go to a psychologist for treatment. ahhh but she liked it, it was still rape.

the ending is rushed. I have the feeling that the author wanted to write a lot more but in the last chapters he gave up. 3 or 4 chapters before the end, the fl didn't discover that ml was Z and ended without knowing. The plot was of good quality until chapters 250~300 and then it declined to the level of horrible, if you don't have anything interesting to read then I recommend it but otherwise it's very weak for a current 4+ rating at the time I've been reading it.

I forgot to add, fl must have bipolar because she can't decide if she's strong or weak. And ml likes to be a tree.

all the characters have alzheimer's, ml should have at least a normal IQ but even though he has a lot of relevant information about fl he still thinks he slept with wang li and not fl who he knows was sent to the psychiatric hospital after giving birth, he must have Alzheimer's at the maximum level, in the end all the characters are very superficial, the novel is a repetition of random people accusing the fl and after a few chapters they treat her like a goddess, I forgot to say that everyone has Alzheimer's because I think I even had Alzheimer's reading the novel. repeat, repeat, repeat.

all the characters have alzheimer's, ml should have at least a normal IQ but even though he has a lot of relevant information about fl he still thinks he slept with wang li and not fl who he knows was sent to the psychiatric hospital after giving birth, he must have Alzheimer's at the maximum level, in the end all the characters are very superficial, the novel is a repetition of random people accusing the fl and after a few chapters they treat her like a goddess, I forgot to say that everyone has Alzheimer's because I think I even had Alzheimer's reading the novel. repeat, repeat, repeat.

I would give it a maximum of 1 star, or even less if possible. (Apologies for any errors in my English, as it is not my native language.) I read up to chapter 640, and it was bad, but I managed to continue due to the kingdom construction aspect. However, starting from chapter 631, it became complete rubbish. A journey that used to take 30 days turned into a day in the desert, hahaha! It felt like the author gave up writing and let their dog take over. The quality deteriorated so much after chapter 631 that I felt like punching my computer. I endured reading 631 chapters of poor quality, and to make matters worse, even a child wouldn't write that badly. Honestly, if I had known this would happen, I would have abandoned it and not wasted my time. Another point is that if you don't enjoy watching gameplay of a game, then don't read it, because the story is essentially a gameplay description spread over numerous chapters. The world-building is terrible, the plot constantly changes, other characters are merely NPCs with whom you can't form a bond, and the protagonist is just someone with many psychological issues. I wouldn't be surprised if, in the end, the protagonist wakes up in a hospital bed in a coma, as the author's creativity in writing feels like being trapped in my nightmares at night. In the end, I only feel sadness and disappointment for the time lost reading this.

To complement my thinking. Personalities development rank for me: First Silvia: op in real life, cute but a queen, wants to evolve, narcissistic but not extreme. Second Isolde: silly but cute, great friend, honorable, carefree, fragility for being seen as manly many times, comical. Third evie: problems with money, does not have marked development yet, problems socializing, low self-esteem?, it is only third because the author wrote more interaction because otherwise any other friend of silvia would be here, especially pamela or even the spoiled lily who could have a nice plot twist and personality growth. I'm being very impartial in this classification because the one I like the most is isolde and for now I don't even have a strong attachment to evie from what I've read so far, I still think that the best and with more potential for fl would be silvia and with plenty of room to improve yet as a character, there could be better development for evie but it has to be a giant leap otherwise it's not worth it.