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I like the story, its entertaining. definitely not something to evaluate too deeply tho. it use one of the most OP abilities besides plot armor and thats the "Power of convenience." where everything conveniently seems to workout regardless of how ridiculous it is. that's a staple of a lot of fanfic so it can be overlooked. the author does seem to skim over important details. like the MC murdering 100s of millions of folk through fiery crashes, starvation, dead hospital patients, just recently born babies, etc. from him elevating the world and destroying tech. they kinda just brush this under the rug and the MC gets like a beneficial skill from killing innocent folk. lol I don't mind him killing folk but let there be actual consequences or guilt or something. this happens in one form or other over and over again thru the story so you can't really ignore it completely or id have given a better rating. overall worth a try before judging.

Good story but there are some flaws. 3 that stand out. 1. is the beginning, I know every origin story has been overused but not trying at all isn't an option, its a terrible start. getting passed that you'll find an entertaining story. 2. forced personality change from overlord characters has always been its downfall. its unnatural, boring 😴 , and so cliche. I've hoped for a fanfic to bypass this and have actual character growth but we are left with manufactured bull thats forced upon them. such an easy writing tool to use. 3. The MC keps forcing the plot to stay on course. random sh*t like telling momonga to randomly hand a potion to someone to initiate plot events, instead of just carving your own path. big let down. overall the story is still enjoyable but not anything too special. I'd recommend giving it a read before judging.

Every story this author writes is gold so far including this space adventure!

I like the technological aspect but this MC sucks in every way possible. such poor business decisions and life decisions. there's nothing relatable or admirable about his character except for his care for his mother. definitely a let down.

I like the story a lot, I like the male MC, its a unique origin as well. my biggest problem lies in the woman MC. she's done nothing to change canon. I know its early in the story but her refusal to help has honestly just made me look at her as an imaginary friend of the golden trio. I wish you'd kill her off because she's that useless and definitely the only reason I didnt give this story 5 stars. the commitment to the Lynn's backstory, training, development is noteworthy and praiseworthy but this female MC needs to be written off. No outcome has changed with her actions and sadly 95% of dialogue is still the same even with her around. useless. Make her useful or kill her off or this story won't ever reach its potential. changing canon events is all about the outcome not the how of it. you could say the same about the MC but at least he's not around the golden trio so he actually has an excuse for not doing anything but if canon events never change then ill make sure to correct this review and give it 2 stars.

While there is an entertaining aspect to this story there is literally no plot. everything that happens doesn't change canon. actually the story basically just plays in the background while people get rewards. possibly the dumbest premise in the world.

any story title that starts with "I," is a terrible story.

Great story, uniquish origin story. definitely a quality piece overall. The MC is pretty basic though. definitely the cliche standard everyone on this app likes tho. The fake reincarnator from our world who doesn't mind killing, is a low key battle junkie, and isn't a maniac. just really forced bull that became the norm because sad folk on here don't have any backbone in real life, so they live vicariously. he only likes his family, doesn't care about anything else except training, and lacks any moral compass. just an overpowered NPC basically but I only say it negatively because it seems like every fanfic follows this same pattern presently. Other than that an enjoyable story.

Good story but the perspective of the author has been corrupted by the fanfic culture and its prejudice towards certain characters. I find it boring, cliche, and playout at this point so it definitely impacts the quality of this story overall.

thank you for the info!