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Wow this is like the best transition of a chapter in a story I've ever read. The way he literally screws over the JL and puts them in their place OMG lol.

Great series keep it up please your A really good writer. Just please don't abbanon it its really worth the investments. Also I would see about posting on a patron site its its so so so so good.

I'm Impressed great story thanks................,..................................,...................,..............,.......I'm Impressed great story thanks................,..................................,...................,..............,.......

😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 easily the best story so far.........,.....................................................................

Great story would love to see this turned into a novel someday because its awsome the character development that went into is great the only meh part was the publishing time

So far so good like the character development and backstorys and the fact that the Russian knock off captain America bit the bullet earlier *slow clap.....standing ovation*

Seriously great story you are a really good writer and deserve to be given credit for it the characters are all awesome and even the plot development is great he's slightly open but not unreasonable or unrealistic which makes it a slow burn with just the right amount of time