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2019-05-20 Unido Philippines
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Games · ArkAnghel
I like how you comment on every chapter I have
ch 11 New Skill appear
Games · ArkAnghel
you can cut this to many sentences to avoid block of words. but the creation of sentences is good.
As he slowly trod down the stairs he started to introduce himself 'Hey my name is Uteki Smith sometimes people tease me at school because of my name but it's a traditional fishman name so I rep it with pride by the way I'm a Fishman you see in a world like mine Fishman are kinda trash no cap it's not like we get beaten and enslaved of course not but there is a certain element of bias against us especially from the stronger races you see there are dozens of different races in my world all with different inherent abilities and affinities but us fishmen well you see our only abilities are to breathe underwater and a small control over water, for example, making big bubbles out of saliva that sort of thing also we can exert a weak poison that would at best make someone feel a bit drowsy but that's a last resort sort of thing for me because well I dont know my mum says it because I don't use it a lot and I have to get used to it but whenever I use it I pretty much K.O myself so there's no point plus we don't have that much talent in well ... anything anyways i live in the kingdom of Legturia there is four kingdoms legturia is home to the the twenty districts mydream is to be the strongest from district twenty.
Fantasy · Kneesdeep24
tell me if you reached the end of the chapter and then I release the last batch of chapter stocks
ch 132 Don't judge until you have fought with it
War · ArkAnghel
thank you very much on the feed back you can contact me in discord
they train for developmemt
ch 55 The Candidacy
War · ArkAnghel
volume 2 is thw answer to that
ch 13 A Death made to be stronger
War · ArkAnghel
You will see the answer on that on volume 2
ch 23 Overwatch
War · ArkAnghel
Well thanks for reading tho, tbh I repeat the shots or how the gun works because I want my readers to feel how strong it is, and because in the future there will be a lot of skills so the readers won't get different ideas or interpretation for other skills.
ch 70 A face to be revealed
War · ArkAnghel
welp cant afford a premium one lol
ch 0 1 Starting Fresh
War · ArkAnghel
read volume 2
``All I know was the magician can't cast a spell the healer was crying and both of our damage dealers specifically the two swordsmen was knocked down early… that was not training that was a real test if we can survive outside of the wall. But that monster was the modified thing is unbeatable.``
War · ArkAnghel
He used someone account
[OBJECTIVE UPDATED BLOOD BULLET: DEALING WITH LONE WOLVES]
War · ArkAnghel
1st The earth in the novel is not the earth you know the earth in the novel are much advance that why he academy that the mc entered is a technological academy. 2nd abou the safe zones popping up thr answer is in volume 2
ch 28 Returning to were I came from
War · ArkAnghel
The entire Empire is currently in dissaray a small revolution is brewing near and commanders that are loyal to the previous emperor.
The voice and tone of the Aide-de-camp changed when he talked to the 2nd Division Commander. The 2nd Division commander has only 2 reply options, agreeing to the orders that will give him recognition. And the other one which is going to make him a traitor.
Inverted Crown
Fantasy · ArkAnghel