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This is good. I was getting tired of the same ole Ork reincarnation theme this is new and different and so far it is a very interesting story

Haa., Hogwarts done RPG style with high tech added I love this

Hay author it's time to bring out the editing squad you no I'm getting a headache here

There seems to be no words of valor no motivation a lack of leadership spoken by our mc here how disappointing the author seems to have stumbled a bit here

Always the one to arrive late to the party but still in time to pull the winning move out of his (ahem.) Hay ideiot, stop admiring yourself. It's time to bring home the baken

This is becoming quite they adventure. I like it lets hope they author can maintain this level of quality and thoughtfulnes throughout

So far it remains an interesting story and well worth the read

Seems interesting so far

I have to put forward this thought to the author as a lifeline to reconnect with logic and coman sense (just how much blood does the human body hold and with how often blood is spurted out does this not suggest that he has nothing left in the tank as it were at what point does even magic fail if there is nothing left to work with? This is ridiculous he can not possibly still be living why the author is so adamant in continuing this characters tortured existence makes no sence

Time after time Eon coughed up blood now really this is an extremely old gentleman on his last breath pushing himself way beyond his allotted life span it does not matter how much power one has achieved at this point when your physical foundations are gone that's it

Ohh well done

this is another book that sets the bar for all the up and coming new writers. It needs to be continued it is that good

I will stop reading this book here I don't like the direction in which this mans character is heading towards this is not an honorable type of personality as a main character of a book he should be doing everything possible to save the human race I don't see that anywhere in this story even less now

He is maturing becoming more of aware of what needs to be done to become strong (TTHIS IS A GOOD THING

This guy is something else not sure what the Authors instant was for this character build but I find our boy lacking in many areas. 0 empathy for his fellow man, far to dence for my likening

You can not guaranty no one will die that is an io impossibility when so many variables are in play

This is a bad tactical choice. This ties down his shadows to one spot while the rest go around them