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finally, out of all the trash that makes it to number 1, we finally have a story that has good writing and a God damn decent main character. I'd like to see some character progression but beggars can't be choosers. this is a good fic and worth a read.

If you can stand an MC brainwashing basically everything to get his way. Read this. Trash plot and no character development, like at which point did you think this shit was okay, this starts from the beginning.

I see what you are saying, and there are some genuinely alright Chinese novels that balance that arrogance with an actual plot. But this ain't it chief. Its fair this has nothing on the guy translating but all I'm saying is if you want to read something worth your time skip this. If you want to waste your time behind another trash fix that is popular somehow probably because its based in the marvel universe, well this'll do ya.

I don't know how web novel thought I gave this 2.5 stars when I rated character development, plot and the writing a ability at 1*. Chapter stability at a 5* simply because of how good the translation team is. And 3* for world building, since they are using a pre established world. For the record webnovel, my average for this entire slog is 2*

I don't understand all these people asking for more, every time I read this I fall asleep cos of how little development there is and how boring it is. Background is legit taken from elsewhere and it still fails to add to it. Sure multiple chapters a week, translated but god is it a slog. Honestly for a fan fic, don't waste your time, read something better.