Webnovel Author: Benoit_Valtin - Fanfic&Novel Collection

we need an illustration with mask

chapter course and only a POV wow there, I hope that you will increase the quality and the number of words story it is interesting but that is if it is only to make complete chatgpt...

ah well that's a big difference with the original, in the first version the memories are completely lost, there you left an exit door

the word krypton would have pulverized the door lol

law's comment at the end is too much, he was kidnapped by kaido and was brainwashed normally

2.. all hypocrites

it's lyanna, all the lords must have already seen her, I don't see how they can stay close to jon

too much of a hole, he won't be able to do anything with his life if he has to redo DC, Marvel... and moreover video games

Hell no

Quel horreur, c'est a vomir mais bon

yes, no its stupid

hahaha, amazing chapter

too many cliché sentences, it's horrible to read, I want to stop, it's a visual pain at this level. I saw you respond, we feel that you have the desire but it doesn't work, it's too basic, too cliché. and black widow who says she understands it, who also learned to control her powers...

real authors don't need a chapter like this...

and once again everyone calls him by his first name...

It's a very rushed story, meeting Selena, then Bruno Mars, and now Taylor Swift. It’s too much, too much and too fast, he’s young, he has a lot of time to meet celebrities. I'm going to stop there (ch17), I'm sorry but I can't continue, it's too rushed. you should watch the other stories about Hollywood, they are not as fast as you, and yet generally the mc is a teenager faster. here are some good fanfictions: Tycoon Actor in Hollywood, Why Bother Being a Hero?, Snakes and Ladders, I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)

Et maintenant il parle à un adulte tout seul, il sait même que c'est le masque qui va voir un peu d'or prochainement comme c'est commode... Pff