Luca_Tavares - Profile

The kingbuild and crossover aspects are really well done, even the OCs are growing on me. I would enjoy a smaller harem, though, with less relationships each with more "screen time". But since weiss is too cute with her broken/brocon mind I can look past it. My fav rwby ff and top 3 overall ff

her good beginning, if I have to point one thing that I would rather not see in this new project it would be making the MC OP too fast. Silverfire had a good balance with the slice of life facet and I can understand that a 100+ chap story can be draining, but pietro was already one shooting thor/hulk level powerhouses and on top of that he got a stone... Anyway I liked the limitations and that you didnd go for reality warping

Good premise and execution so far. I really like the power lvls, it is easy to understand and creates more layers than completely: useless normal wizard > dumbs/voldy powerhouse ( and thank god the mc is not super op or simply a complete pushover ). The slice of life aspect and the relationships are shapping up nicely aswell, no character feels forced. 5/5 so far