Webnovel Author: The_Ram_TS - Novel Collection

Supposedly this is a Frieren fanfic, but until chapter 60, the protagonist only interacts with the author's characters. Each chapter feels very bland, as if the author wrote for the sake of writing, without an objective, without details, I don't find any effort in this "fanfic" just a lot of words without quality.

The story is great, well detailed and very entertaining. I like how the character has weaknesses and the author solves them at the pace of history. It has a good drama, simple and not one of those that is far-fetched. Excellent character development and excellent setting description. Simply 10/10

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This novel is boring as sh#t. Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored Bored bored.

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It's a slow story. It has a good description of the setting, I think its problem is the description of some things as characters, it rambles a lot in that sense. There is also the fact that many Chapters do not have exciting scenes, which makes it tedious to read.

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The story has potential, but it is being totally wasted. Things like: forcing the mc not to go to Orario until he is 16. Why? Or the confusing wordings. Just turn off the desire to read

A "review" for the review. Fantastic.

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The story is not there, to a certain extent it is entertaining. The problem is that at some point too many characters were added and the protagonist was somewhat forgotten. Like a filler, but it's not anime.