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I don't understand, what's the point of all this? Why does mc want to be a youtuber? For money? Just go to stark or something, why are you writing a f musical for views? Not only is that dumb, but now you should be a target with spy gadget videos and all. If this fic was about system that makes mc youtube videos, I'll understand and even read that, but without the system there's no incentive to do all of that.

Initially I liked the story, but then the translation got so bad, I had no choice but to give up. For example mc using "toilet water" to break from shisui genjutsu makes total sense... The water smelled so bad it woke him up, right? ... There are a lot similar mistranslated powers, items, names etc. The story gets worse too when mc finally defects from his village. Writing - if I could I would give a 0 Updates - 4 Story - 3 Character - nothing special 3 World background - at least background "exist", i didn't like it so 3.

I don't care how good is your grammar/updates/story/character/world. This is just a disgusting fanfic full of debauchery. Mc is a little spoiled boy who never grew out of her momma's tits. Having sex doesn't mean he is a badass - it means he is weak. Including brainwashing to the mix doesn't help mc situation whatsoever.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that is a complete garbage written by the chat gpt.

Tbh I didn't enjoy this fanfic. Not that it's bad or anything, but nothing interested happened... No hook and no sinker you could say, who knows, it might improve, but the story was boring to me. The mysterious introduction to mc original body ruined the story to me. His system is not that impressive either - it's just there for some unknown reason. Mc is just a shitty version of Geralt of rivia - again with no reason whatsoever.

Writing and update quality is good (4/5), but for everything else there's not much to say. The story and character design is butchered because mc is op in his world standards and he doesn't use any of his skills. MC flaunts his money, does whatever he wants etc. I read up to the latest chapter and I won't continue to read this because there's no point in doing so. World background sucks - different tv characters are mentioned from time to time and then they are forgotten.