Webnovel Author: QuiteSarcastic - Fanfic Collection

QuiteSarcastic

QuiteSarcastic

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2020-12-31 Unido Norway

Emblemas 5

Moments 1019

QuiteSarcastic
Replied to Khalderas

And you shouldn't as she is used as a glorified plot device to develop the main character.

"Mom, you haven't called me that since I was two," Saya whispered, weakly smiling, but then tears began to gather in the corners of her eyes. "I'm sorry I almost left you alone, Ryo-chan!"

Red Nara

Red Nara

Anime & Comics · l_legolas

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Commented

Proof-reading is weak with this one.

"I've come back hell," I replied, as I looked at myself which reverted to my true appearance as Theus.

DxD: Random Reward System

DxD: Random Reward System

Anime & Comics · Dr_Frauds

QuiteSarcastic
Replied to Void_City_16279

It's most likely Grammarly's auto-correct, as "Petra" is a female name, which was most popular around the 60s or 70s. And I guess the correction software registers it to be so as well.

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Posted

Quality = OK-ish. There are plenty of typos and odd sentence structures in the majority of the chapters up to chapter 17. It's understandable, yes, but it's dumbed down so much that every logical action is replaced by the whimsical stereotype of the typical shonen protagonist who wants to bang his sister for some god-for-sake reason. -Stability: Ok. Story Development: There's lots to say about that, but it's mainly summarized in how I described the quality of the fic. Each chapter gives him a magnificent power boost, but the MC never improves. His actions grow dumber and dumber the further in you get. -Character Design: Meh, MC acts like he's afraid to go out the front door in fear of being crushed by almighty entities. -World Background: Cool, MC's world is DC, yet what does that mean? Oh, here's a random ass quest to go to a random world, almost like his chat group's worlds doesn't exist, and he has to cover grounds in a world that comes out of absolutely nowhere. Overall, this fanfic is overrated and does not belong in the top charts where it currently is. The plot is a lazy amalgamation of mixed-mashed worlds, and the author can't nail a single original character personality. They all go along like it is an acid-induced dreamscape where the MC collects his harem of useless nobodies because he needs to collect women en masse. -Harsh? Nah, especially not when the author wants to get paid for this drivel through p@treon.

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Commented

"Immunity" be like:

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Based on the description, this potion totally limits the demon's influence on the human body.

DC: Dimensional Luck

DC: Dimensional Luck

Anime & Comics · Sothisq

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Replied to Rtanj

Then what stops you from instead changing it from "older brother" to sibling? :P

"Who are you?" I asked calmly as ever, but no response came for a couple of moments before the very same voice gave me an answer. "Let's say that I'm your patron's older brother if I were to use your mortal hierarchy, I do not possess a name but you do and it's quite rude not to introduce yourself."

Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle

Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle

Anime & Comics · Rtanj

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Commented

I already feel good about this fic. An author with good taste knows to shy away from such a nightmare-fueled reality such as all the consuming ching chong!

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"I was about to leave the house after a Starcraft workout when everything went black and..." He suddenly realized what kind of shit he got himself into and put his hand on his face, "Not Chinese romance, not Chinese romance..."

One Piece: Hunter God

One Piece: Hunter God

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

QuiteSarcastic
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"Didn't I get shot directly in the head while clashing with the enemy army and I been killed?"

One Piece:The Lust System

One Piece:The Lust System

Anime & Comics · Yass_Odyssey

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Commented

So... ChatGPT is hard at work huh...

In the grimy, rain-soaked streets of New York City's Queens, a relentless downpour painted the scene. Amidst the murky backdrop, a diminutive figure darted through the alleys, clad in a battered hoodie that struggled to fend off the persistent rain. The faded grey t-shirt underneath clung to their skin, and weathered pants, accompanied by shoes that barely clung to life, completed the ensemble. A worn cloth concealed their face, shielding them from both the elements and the harsh reality of the surroundings—the drug-ridden, alcohol-soaked, gang-infested slums of Queens.

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

QuiteSarcastic
Commented

His grandfather seems to be one of those bullshido grandmasters on youtube, however, he's just a normal soldier who became intimate with the avatar and suddenly got spirit cancer...

But before he was defeated, he was holding Aang's shoulders with his hands as tightly as possible. He somehow absorbed a piece of Raava, the spirit of light and peace and also the Avatar Spirit.

Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

Anime & Comics · some_writer

QuiteSarcastic
Replied to A_Travelling_Bard

He's one of those... you know, those nasty basement-lurking harem fanatics who believe that a relationship like a harem represents just "Works"

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But Scott managed to activate this ability with only a 5% chance of activating, he had to admit, this really was pure luck, mainly because Alex didn't use any Admin power to help Scott.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcastic
Replied to NamelessKingSlayer

That makes two of us, and I completely agree. However, I based my reply on the fact that this fic did not manage to reflect her character in the slightest, making her seem like a Dumbledore after saying this calmly: "Harry, DID YOU PUT YOUR NAME IN THE GOBLET OF FIIAH!?"

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"I wasn't expecting to ever see one of your kind again. Not after the massive crime that your father committed against this world! You better give me a good explanation Angel!" The Ancient One glared at me as she spoke.

The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

Movies · StarWaves

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