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Keep up the good work author!

4.8 The concept is good (It's not that new but this concept is very rare to see.) The story development is decent. Nothing special is happening yet cause it's still new. For the World Background and Character Design, I think it's still too early to judge on that but I'm hoping to see something new but interesting. Writing Quality, I have a feeling that the author are probably using grammarly which is good. However, sometimes I feel like it's kinda hard to read(?). I think searching for the right synonyms, simplifying the sentence construction, and lessening the use of "," could help. (It might help with the word count too.)

Probably the most decent among the new trials. There's some flaws in the translation but overall it's interesting. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This is not bad at all for new readers.... But if you had been reading chinese novels for few years you'll find the writing annoying like... 1.) "One had to know that blah blah blah.." 2.) "If others would know about this they will die at blah blah.." 3.)"MC clicked his tongue at annoyance.... MC clicked his tongue and rejoice..." 4.) "The blah blah as if blah blah." 5.) "She's so pretty, she has a cold demeanor, glinting eyes, pretty eyebrows, sexy curves, pouty lips, a unique acne.... blah blah" It's funny how female characters always are described so detailedly while the MC's description is just... a transmigrator who failed 4 times nd were granted a cheat just because...

There were no men in this world. Imagine if it's the other way around... ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................