I hope you like them
Wow!! Superbly written and incredibly human decisions
ch 50 Chapter 50 – Reasons
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Amazing chapter as always
ch 47 Chapter 47 – Warning
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Man the guards here are truly friendly and human-like. Unlike their wuxia/xianxia counterparts.
"Our Earth Apprentices created several walls made of stone," the guard explained while Alex looked at the aftermath. "Your sled wagon punched through seven of them before being stopped by the eighth. That's a new record! The old record had only managed to get through three. Quite impressive."
Fantasy · Warmaisach
This was truly a stupid situation which I can see myself doing
'I'm going to hit the city walls!'
Fantasy · Warmaisach
They're soo dead...
"That guy seems to come from Coldew Village! We've hit it big, boys!" one of the men said with a smirk.
Fantasy · Warmaisach
At least his parents are sensible...
ch 75 Chapter 75 - Secret's out the bag
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Hmmmm..... so does Zou like Fan or just admires him???
ch 66 Chapter 66 - Abilities~~
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
ummmm...... IDK why but it seems kinda forced to me. Like, there are many fan-service moments. I get that it is required but these things shouldn't be the main point for their starting relationship. It seems very unnatural.... They should fall in love naturally [like, MC doesn't know that his parents think that he is smitten with Fan and even Fan thinks so. MC is kept in the dark, the MC will enter into embarrassing situations (with or without him knowing) and then he won't know when their relationship has gone too ahead. And then he would've gone too far in the relationship so he will accept him (this is unnatural since MC unknowingly entered into a relationship)]Author I really hope you don't mind me giving out these critical reviews. It's just that I like this story and I would just like to point out some things
ch 64 Chapter 64 - Everything is Red
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Get tough man, there'll be much more horrible things in the apocalypse you can't be a crybaby...... Seriously though, why has he been a crybaby till now...... I didn't see such behavior while he was surviving in the apocalypse...
"Oh, my baby... you hurt yourself because you did not want to hurt others." his eyes filled up with tears automatically. He gently sobbed, nuzzling against her. "I'm so sorry... I'm so sorry that I could not find you before... if I had you would not have surfed from that cruel men's medical testing."
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
He lived in a harsh world for 10 years, surviving from thugs, zombies and mutated beings..... but he acts childish after reincarnating instantly
"But...." Zou Yue hesitated a bit. 'I don't want to see that poisonous white lotus...' he pouted.
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
This chapter felt a bit underwhelming.... Like, how did MC guess all this stuff so accurately. Up until now he didn't mention of being suspicious of anything and suddenly he just knew everything....and I thought that living for 10 years more in the future would've made him more responsible and serious. But he acts without thought and gets in trouble in front of ML every time.
ch 47 Chapter 47 - Substantial Proof
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Lol MC did not link that the rat being infected could be because of the experiment but he immediately understood his power as being related to "Time". Sigh.... I know that I'm just bashing the MC but please author I just don't like airhead MC. You could let him be weak, let him have a bad personality or let him make stupid decisions but please at least let him have a 'Presence of Mind'.
ch 18 Chapter 18 - Scabs and Wounds
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Man, I love his parents
ch 18 Chapter 18 - Scabs and Wounds
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Yeah, I've read both of them. They were nice too
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach