Webnovel Author: Audreylarene - Novel Collection

Nice plot with a good background I also like how the characters were described and how detailed the story is. The suspension and mystery is very good here.

I like the background of the actions , also the characters are well described a mysterious circle around the characters is interesting indeed

I like the background of the actions, also the characters are well described, having a mysterious circle around the main character is important to build good fantasy story.

I like the background of the actions , also giving the side characters the lead is something really interesting , keep going author ........

I like the historical background of the actions also the characters are well described my poind would be about the names, that it's not common to remember

Hey there_ since I have started this book I'm planning an eerie path for this story in a world close yet far from reality. Waiting to hear your thoughts about it, I would appreciate helping with improvements

I like how deep the description of the scenes is making you imagine the view well and leaving a nice philosophical impact on readers ......

I really like how the characters images were described, it makes me interested to imagine those pretty characters in the novel scenes.......