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Lilith_Zenon
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Man, I wish this would come back ;.;
ch 19 Battle in Asgard
Devil fruits as a Queen.
Anime & Comics · Amateur_keyboard
Iz gud storeh~. (It's a good story~.)
We have sent this to officially accept your offer of a world government under your leadership. This acceptance has come to us after much discussion and discourse over your leadership, skills, talents, skills, powers, governance and accomplishments. We are excited to work with you as the heads of 'states' and wish to meet with you in a month's time to figure out some of the rules we will operate under... There was some issues with certain segments of society but ultimately the world-wide referendum was above 70%, those that chose to vote.
Reality Bender System, Marvel
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
And you need a body for it~.
"I'll make it so that you can have the memories of your time in the Reincarnation Centre, and I'll tell you about their location as well. Coupled with the unique skill Great Sage, that should be way more than enough for killing Issei, no?"
DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
Anime & Comics · Pastlives
A chapter ended in this universe but many chapters of Kai will continue in another universe as Naruto Uzumaki.
Overlord Naruto
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
This part I disagree with. It was not the best way to have her die. Because it was a third party, a party which had already gone an extra mile and helped her I add, it felt forced and and "So mote it be!" kinda deal. The Angel's have zero reason for wanting her to awaken her powers, they are not invested into her. Instead, you should have went through your system in some way. It would have demanded more of you time, but I honestly, truly believe it would have fit your story much better.
I have not, nor will I EVER nerf Talia. This was something I always knew, and will never change. Her powers being weakened by nigh-Omnipotent deities was simply the best way I can have her "die" in order to unlock her hidden power. And that weakening is obviously not permanent, and has already been lifted, after her regeneration.
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
Because it was forced haha. You quite literally "Deus Ex Machinai" an event to get her to evolve. But rather, it was an "Angel" instead of "God." But the point stands. Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying your story, but you could have done that little bit so, SO much better. And it's slightly annoying, because I KNOW you can! You have the skills as a writer! It's not meant to disparage you, at least I don't want to, it's meant to just give you some constructive criticism.
A LOT of people got mad about her dying, and to them I ask "Do y'all have no patience whatsoever?" Like I don't want to be rude, but like have you never heard of something called "Story progression" and there's a thing called revealing more in the future, it happens a lot in fanfic.
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
That means a lot of people are having an absolutely horrid day~.
Demiurge is having a nice day . He is walking toward the throne room . After entering inside the throne room . He met with albedo .
Overlord Naruto
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Prolly why the system is giving him a freebee and increasing his control~.
Reward : Free chakra control stats +20 , nine tail beast summoning and nine tail shape transformation .
Overlord Naruto
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Only 10???
{Reward: Level Up x 10!! Eternal Bragging Rights! ???}
The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)
Movies · StarWaves
Ahhh, sheeple. To be expected~.
Some people even misunderstood and exaggerated it and changed it to Damiyo's support. Now according to the people of Konoha, he is supported by the fire Damiyo. Now no one wants to mess with Naruto after this rumour and incident.
Overlord Naruto
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Maybe she can dodge swords now.... hmm, maybe we start with a wrench instead.
The user now has a sort of time and spatial related senses, allowing them to sense, see, move, etc, and more related to space and time. This allows the user to notice distortions in space and time, retain perception of local time flow, directly perceive the interstellar motions of cosmological bodies or their inhabitants including sensing the "shape" of the world to the extent that they were aware when trapped in pocket dimensions
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
Eh, more like plot killing all of her senses and instincts for... what ever is happening.
'...I died again, didn't I?' Talia softly thought, as she was within her own mental space. A sigh escaping her at the realization.
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
I mean, you could simply resurrect her~.
Neia did not respond and went inside the house. She covered Manna's naked body with a white sheet and took the girl on her arms, then she went outside. Before coming, she had ordered one of the undead to open a grave some meters away from her house. Neia walked slowly to the grave and put Manna's body inside to rest forever.
The Supreme Overlord: Ainz Ooal Gown
Anime & Comics · SopitaCx
Thanks for the chapter~.♥
ch 19 Crafting in a Dungeon
RWBY: Dragon's Heart
Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
Woot, new chapter~! Thank you♥
ch 24 "Happy Farm"
The First Vampire of YGGDRASIL
Anime & Comics · Ciel_Best_Waifu
This was a great chapter~.
ch 249 Chapter 249
The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)
Movies · StarWaves
Thank you for the chapter! It's picking up heat~!♥
ch 35 Uchiha Massacre Begins
Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet