Austin_B_1332 - Profile

I've enjoyed the story so far. I haven't read far enough to give an accurate review but I do love the power system. James' manual is interesting and I'm excited to see how his power develops. I just have a couple questions about the school itself. Why are the class sizes so small? Is there a reason for that?

I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.

Love the story. Most VR webnovels have too many numbers and fights that last forever. This novel doesn't do that. The fights are not too long or too short and the fights don't use numbers very often to show damage. The characters are well designed and fun to follow. Highly recommend the story.

I understand. University can take a lot of time away from you. Keep up the good work

I really enjoy the story. The grammar is good and I like the main character's personality. My only problem is the update stability. One chapter a week is so little for a chapter that isn't that long.

Amazing story so far. It is well written and had interesting characters. There are a couple grammatical errors where the word he is used for a female character but this doesn't take away from the story in a massive way. I would highly recommend the story.

I have really enjoyed the story so far. The mc has a great personality. She manipulates people very well. I also love her Teleportation ability. Most of the time teleportation is described as having an image of the place you want to Telenor formed. In this story, she turns her body into fast moving atoms with allows for a lot more versatility. Overall, I would recommend the story.

So far I'm really annoyed with the story. The mc is stupid. The things he says as well as his actions annoy me so much for some reason. He has a weak personality that makes me feel like he will constantly be pushed around. There are also several Grammer errors although it's readable and not nearly as bad as some of the stories on this app.

I honestly hated the few chapters that have been released so far. The main character is overpowered but he gets pushed around easily and is a complete idiot. I find the mc terrible and annoying. Some people might like a stupid mc but not me.

I have enjoyed the story a lot. Everything flows well and is easy to read. One thing I'm confused about is how the characters get stronger. I don't know if I'm missing something or if it just hasn't been revealed yet. I also hope that this doesn't become a harem. I don't want to see the mc with a bunch of girls. Overall the story is well written and I would highly recommend it.

so far I've enjoyed the story. The only problem is that it can be slow at times but other than that everything else is good. My favorite part is that the story makes sense. He didn't become a genius who could use science to create magic out of no where. It was established that he was smart in his previous life. Overall I'm excited to see how the story continues to be developed.

Love the book. I love how there are countless amounts of races are competing with each other. By introducing so many races, it allows for many interesting characters. The main character as well as the side characters that are added all have well developed personalities. I use wish there was more than one chapter a day but I can't be to picky. Highly recommend reading it.

In my previous review, I wasn't talking about how Nafiz becomes a female at the beginning. I was talking about how the word he or his is used a lot when describing Nafiz and her thoughts throught out the story. The word her or she should be used instead as Nafiz is female. I can understand why these grammar mistakes are made though as it can be lost in translation. For example in chapter 48, the 20th block of words, it says "...did not like Nafiz even if he provided meat to the community." The word she should be used there instead of he. Other than those small grammar mistakes, I've enjoyed the story so far.

I've read to chapter 24 and I've enjoyed the story for the most part. The chacters are interesting and the story has been good so far. My biggest complaint is the constant changes between genders for characters. I've seen this before and it ruins the story a lot so I hope this can be fixed in future chapters. It would also be cool if this novel continued to have updates as it hasn't updated in a while.

The story is amazing. The interactions between characters is well done and the personalities of each character is well developed. Furthermore, the world building is described in detail. My only problem is that the chapters aren't released often enough. I understand that the chapters are a bit longer but all I want is a chapter released every other day at least. Highly recommended story.

I enjoyed it a lot. My only problem was the constant mistakes with pronouns used as the characters genders are constantly changing. Other than that, the story is amazing and fun to read.

The main character is stupid. What normal person would think that a ring in a secret location is useless. Furthermore every battle is way more difficult than it has to be. Why is it always dragged out. Even against weaker opponents. At least the supporting characters and the setting of the world is written pretty well.