I love 😍 the five chapters mass update plssss ^^^ more and more 💋. Keep up the hard work 💪 ❤❤❤❤💋💋💋💋💕💕💕💕🎉🎉🎉💥💥💥💥😘😘😘 I wish you success 🎉
Anime & Comics · God_Child
This is really good.
ch 0 3 What is going on?
Fantasy · Sophomaniac
Story is quite catchy and classic. I like the thrill inside it which was already stamped into me after reading the title. Grammar and punctuation needs improvement. Storyline is mysterious and great
Urban · _OB_
You should add a thriller tag too since I subconsciously get the feeling that each chapter is getting more and more thrilling. The story concept is good. Grammar is fine but still needs improvements. Character design and development is good
Fantasy · Eshal_Shahnawaz
Keep it in the library and wait until more chapters are here
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Fantasy · Diety_2004
Conteúdo Pornográfico Ódio ou bullying Divulgação de informações pessoais Violência Spam Outro
I love 😍 the five chapters mass update plssss ^^^ more and more 💋. Keep up the hard work 💪 ❤❤❤❤💋💋💋💋💕💕💕💕🎉🎉🎉💥💥💥💥😘😘😘 I wish you success 🎉
Naruto and Sasuke in DXD
Anime & Comics · God_Child