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Demonqueen6
LV 2Emblemas 4
Moments 60
You aren't releasing the two chaps daily again, why?
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why did you stop writing ?
Nice chaps, but I feel they are pretty short and everything is going too fast, alright? if you continue like this....I wonder if you'll have ideas to write in the future. but all the same, good luck with your contest, as for me, I'll support you to the best of my capability.
ch 0 4 Exploring the dungeon
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Fantasy · Ryongul
Uhmm! Dorian is not just an Ordinary summoned Demon Lord. He is a perveted one! nice chap tho.
ch 0 1 Malenia tasted the Demon Lord
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Fantasy · Ryongul
wearing* not hearing
The cult had spare clothes, and quickly Dorian was also hearing a black cloak. It did fit him well, giving a mysterious vibe to it. Dorian was not sure about what powers he possessed as the Demon Lord. He noticed that his body felt weak, and it did not have anything out of the ordinary. He guessed that being summoned to this world drained all of his powers, and he would need to get stronger.
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Author, your book is great...I love the story BUT improve your English. Hope I'm not sounding rude? The mistake will make some readers dump the book and you wouldn't want that. I'd advise you to use Grammarly, it might be of help to you, especially with punctuation sighs, prepositions and the rest.. if you need help, come I'm @discord. I'll be willing to.
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A very fantastic and interesting book....Just a few chaps and it's great, wonder when it becomes much. When reading it, I felt like I was watching a Korean drama especially when Liz woke up in the hospital and then the four boys rushed to her. It reminds me of one of my favourite c/k dramas. Anyway, this book is recommendable...just give it a try and I promise you that you won't regret it. I wish the author success in this contest and I hope! that you win!
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Nice chap, but the girl was stupid....trying to be heroin when she isn't even capable...tsk! It got her the death she has always been asking for.
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Come'on.....must she sleep with men for money? I dislike this type of women.
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As an author, I'd say this book is nice. The characters are okay although, there is little information about them that I think the author should consider. Like an illustration or something. Then coming to the l**d aspect of it, there are not many scenes about it. As the book is talking about the le*d aspect of the book, I would suggest you try to focus a bit on it. And not just the action part of the book. Overall, the book is highly recommended.