Daniel_Coupe

13d

Commented

Personally think a time skip would work. But you also need to create a skeleton of the story. You have the Big Bang, assassin creed and John wick story lines already introduced. Maybe a rewrite when you have a better structure. Love the way you write right now. You know how to write and write well.

ch 55 Creative Block

The Big Bang Assassin (The Big Bang Theory)

Movies · BlackNilton

Daniel_Coupe

13d

Posted

I got bored after the first 100 chapters or so. It was a good introduction to the story but it just got bogged in details.

Kaijin Fighter: So I Have to Make Monsters, So What?

Eastern · Mizako

Daniel_Coupe

2mth

Commented

+1. It’s a very good fic

ch 121 QUICK SURVEY

Batman x Arc Reactor

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Daniel_Coupe

4mth

Posted

Very good story. Grammer is atrocious. You really need a editor. The character development is good. There is enough that you could expand on it. Was a good read but very hard to read as the nouns for people was all over the place.

The Fifth House: Galegold

Book&Literature · Cadenadeaventuras

Daniel_Coupe

10mth

Posted

Dude. I love the twist this book has. The writing quality is superb. Background info on characters is developing so well. Definitely a well done book so far. Super super excited to see where the rest of the story will take us. Really well done. Keep up the good work.

Immortal In Supernatural

TV · RetMod

Daniel_Coupe

1yr

Posted

Was very interesting to read. Never knew of the lore for the Witcher so this was cool to read.

Elder Blood Witcher

Video Games · Niggross

Daniel_Coupe

1yr

Posted

Story is super fantastic. From my perspective of not knowing anything about the fallout series except for what a pop boy did, this story gave a great introduction and background and has made me want to actually look into the games and play them. Very good writing. Loved the story. You did a very good on the romance part I thought for a apocolypse story and the ending was superb.

Steel Waste

Video Games · Niggross

Daniel_Coupe

1yr

Commented

Can we keep him? Can we, can we, can we?

"I'm the EDGELORD."

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

Daniel_Coupe

1yr

Commented

Rooting for Jonrad

[A/N: Yes, I once wrote an Elder Scroll fanfiction and I am not selling this for any less Lore.]

The Unholy Mage

Fantasy · El_Don

Daniel_Coupe

1yr

Posted

This book keeps ending up in the limited free to read. The first 250 chapters were pretty good then I just lost interest in this. I tried reading it again every time it pops back up but it doesn’t hold any interest for me any more.