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another fic where mc has the Sharingan but hates the Uchiha and is content in watching them get massacred. Same ole Konoha good Uchiha bad even though I'm an Uchiha watch my family get killed do nothing to stop it and serve Konoha.

amazing well told story. I hope you continue writing if not this fic perhaps one of your own creations. I believe you have a sincere talent for writing expertly conveying a relatable and likable main character.

To be honest it just reads as a to do list rather than an actual story. Sasuke trains accomplishes one goal after another theres no real plot just Sasuke training gain power and making those around him stronger. That’ really it, a good story requires the reader to be engaged as it stands I genuinely do not care for any of the characters even worse I can almost guess how the fic will go. Sasuke will get Uber strong naruto will most likely become hokage and they will defeat all there enemies.

use the Sharingan but belittles the Uchiha why even make him an Uchiha mc super powerful for absolutely no apparent reason he keeps the Biju enslaved yet speaks of peace?