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I enjoy this story, but it feels more like a diary than a novel. There isn't much interaction; it's like, "I did this and did that. I'm handsome and I'm a god. I will take over the world with my godly powers," etc. sigh this story would have been enjoyable if the chapter are a little longer as well.

that was the first few chapters but now i feel like i'm mistaken

relies my bad

i enjoy this novel but it's kind of annoying and boring that she relays to much on rimuru ___________________________________________________________

The story overall is good, but I have an issue with the story flow. Is it just me, or does this story feel disjointed? When it changes scenes, there is no way of knowing it's a different point of view, and you get lost about who is talking. Is it the main character or someone else?

this will hopefully get the rating down i don't know why people are giving 5 stars to this and spamming im sure they are bots . __________________________________________________________________

this novel translation is ok but the story is overall boring i have no idea why its 4.6 rating. __________________________________________________________________

why the hell is the chapter so fucking short ? _________________________________________________________________________________________

tbh i enjoy reading this story but the Ai is overpowering the enjoyment of this story sigh. _______________________________________________________---

why did you stop updating this novel it was so good _____________________________________________________________________________________

no this a good novel keep up the good work

this good novel fun to read please keep up the good work ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

i understand but why make him a cat of all things and let him act like a pet i will change the rating to 3 stars later on

I love the story, but why did you have to stop two good fanfics and then just start another novel, like Unique Gamers Travels? Now, it takes longer for a new chapter to be added lately. Travels of the Daughter of God was enjoyable; it was more enjoyable than Unique Gamers Travels.

Yes and no. I would give a story 2 to 3 stars if it's one that I may not enjoy, but the overall story is good even if I don't like it. However, this story was rated 4.8 when I wrote this review. I found it disappointing; I had hoped the story would have more substance. It was boring and not worth the time spent reading. It felt like a waste of hours of my life.

The protagonist's apparent lack of control over their own fate raises questions about their role in the story, casting them more as a pawn than a central figure. Despite their awareness of Doflamingo's ruthlessness, their steadfast loyalty feels unrealistic and strains believability. While it's natural for characters to admire others, the protagonist's unwavering devotion to Doflamingo seems difficult to reconcile with their knowledge of his darker deeds. It's hard to fully immerse oneself in the story when such inconsistencies arise, leaving the reader feeling disconnected and frustrated. Overall, this aspect detracts from the novel's overall enjoyment and impact.

No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.